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Seb. Just an artist trying to keep up with his lattest interests!
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Nov 23, 2023
To:Anime07
thank you a lot for your lengthy comment! i really appreciate some contructive criticism n_n i hope i can continue to grow as a writer from this point. The only point i'd really contest is re: describing MC as a having a flutter in his chest. Something I absolutely wanted to do was portray a queer experience others could relate. In my story MC doesn't really have the time to process his feelings for S (even though the reader is beaten over the head with them lmao) so he just refers to them as physical tangible pains instead of more flowery language.
To:IncognitoMe
thank you a lot! that's so kind to say ^^ <3!
lmaooo i love that, thank you dearly for reading! <3!!!
To:LostLibrarian
thank you so very much for this feedback! i kind of wanna contest you on the tropes thing! if anything he's a Young Master trope bc he has MC-kun hehe >:3 other than that I'm really grateful for your critical comment ^^
To:J.P.B
thank you so much reading! i really tried on that part /. w./
To:BlazedLith
their relationship was what I worked the hardest on so I'm really grateful to see it recognized. thank you a lot!! ^^
woagh this is a very creative take. an entirely different universe and genre from the og prompt :0!
sorry I took so long to check this out ^^!
i really like the way you structured sentences and the string of thoughts type of writing a loot ^^ sorry i took so long checking it out!
Nov 06, 2023
i really like your portrayal of escapism and depression. very cool ^^
To:Lei
thank you a lot for reading and your kind comment lei! I'm feeling flustered after reading it 🥰
To:mochiipaws
thank you so very much angel! <3! I'm really thankful you'd point that out since I really tried my hardest at the dynamic between the protags.
To:Wina Ru
thank you dearly, I'm really grateful for your kind words for my story!!
i really enjoyed reading this one! i agree with lei's comment about clarity. but I think it was still a pleasant if confusing ride ww
thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, i like how the story flows, very nice, very pleasant to read ^^
Nov 01, 2023
lovely prose, beautifully written ^^
