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Aug 23, 2023

To:minatika

Eleona seriously overrated herself, didn't she xD

Oh is it really beautiful when he sings such a song? xD Yeah, Zhang was supposed to be their ace in the sleeve but he just keeps being himself. xD But maybe it's better this way, nobody can say he is biased!

Yeah, Zinia being a farm girl was something over the top I just had to include. xD Milking the goat on stage is something I am sure no other Beauty Contest has ever seen. xD

Ares has his own agenda it seems. Let's keep a close eye on him, he seriously can ruin this all!

Handygirlllll!!! Fighto! xD

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:21

Aug 23, 2023

To:minatika

Oh yes, please do feel about her this way! xD I tried to write her the way that the readers both love her and hate her at the same time. Thank you very much for such a nice compliment!! I may have said this already but Fantasia and Silveria are both my favorite characters here. :3

Well, there's no turning back, Fantasia joined the contest so she might as well give it her all!

I don't even know what to think about Violet at this point, do you? xD

Leanna is that girl that everybody considers cute and you just can't hate her because everything she does is for somebody else's sake! For the most part... And then there's Diantha who despises her. Welp.

Thank you for reading <3

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:20

Aug 23, 2023

To:minatika

I had so much fun writing these scenes with Silveria, Zhang, and overall with judges xD I hope they are also fun to read.

Well, about Beauty Contest, if it should or shouldn't exist... Maybe you're right.

It's impossible to ignore Fantasia's radiance once you get to know her! <3 And Leanna is also too pure to let it pass.

Yes, please join me in protecting Fantasia's smile!! Let's cheer her on in the contest and let's hope her involvement will move at least some people :(

Fantasia Is NOT Ugly!

Chapter:19

Aug 22, 2023

It's not gonna be so easy! Return to the checkpoint, finished!

Level Up at Love School

Chapter:5

Aug 22, 2023

Hmmm, the culprit being the father did cross my mind, I just couldn't think what reasons he could have. I knew that since there was no forshadowing of other characters that it had to be the group we knew, but out of Mia, Jun, Toren, Claire and father, only Claire and Father sounded plausible. I am very glad you didn't taint my precious queen.

And of course, the reasons are to protect Mia. So let's see how this unfolds.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:18

Aug 22, 2023

O-oh... first that comment from Jun that he 'could have saved her'... now that talk about her not having stars. This is looking bad for my baby.

Jun, how could you suspect Toren?! There was no logic behind that!

Leave it to the cat boi to solve the mystery!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:17

Aug 21, 2023

Just how does the fate work that while I was reading about Jun having breakfast from WacDonalds, I was LITERALLY IN MCDONALDS HAVING BREAKFAST?!?! xD Oh goshhh.

Oh no... did they fail?? I wonder who the culprit is because, to my knowledge, there isn't a character that we know that could do this, so it must be a new character. Unless you go for a twist and Claire was the one behind it all along. In any other media, I would have suspected her, but here, she's our precious sorceress, she's not evil! ....Right?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:16

Aug 21, 2023

I'm not sure who your favorite character is, but I can feel that Toren is definitely one of the hottest candidates. xD

"Sometimes there are things that a man has to do" has always been the most illogical thing to say ... and I am a man myself. xD

But oooh, I wanted to see the fight between an elf with a human soul and a half beast cat boi! :3 That could have been awesome so I hope you are not going to rob us of that!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:15

Aug 21, 2023

To:minatika

I am not saying you should rename anything, you're the author and you make the decision. But IF you want to try something different, maybe just a simple: "I'll realize Mia is..."? So that we keep reading to know what or who Mia is.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:13

Aug 21, 2023

Their bond deepens! Next time, time for class!

Level Up at Love School

Chapter:4

Aug 21, 2023

Why are you doing this? Why do I have to suffer all the time? Best girl changes from chapter to chapter! But... I think that Claire does pull me closer... is that her magic? Well, it certainly can't be Jun's magic, right? xP

I put on hold all the stuff I was reading, including manga, because I have to know how this story ends asap!

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:14

Aug 21, 2023

I suspected that this realization had to come sooner or later but it was portrayed so beautifully... "Mia is Mia" manual entry (do I sound like an accountant now?) into that book was very powerful. I kinda wish it wasn't spoiled in the chapter title for even greater impact.

Roki really grows, realizing that he has to listen and not just respond or think about himself. He grows so much and so early that I wonder what else he learns throughout the story.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:13

Aug 20, 2023

Blood in a love-filled world? Ren and his many battles!

Level Up at Love School

Chapter:3

Aug 19, 2023

Ok, if it wasnt 6am here without me actually sleeping whole night, I would have read another chapter because I am finally getting some answers!! I'll go sleep now and then return to this beautifully crafted novel.

Also, I had a theory that Madam Claire also had to have a parallel self somehwere so maybe that is the rival sorceress? And Toren asked her to make it so that he meets Mia before the guy who dated her?

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:12

Aug 19, 2023

Ren makes Svet-sensei worry? Next time, getting to know the world!

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Chapter:2

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