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Avid reader and writer! I love connecting with other writers and readers! I love Harry Potter, Naruto/Shippuden, Spirited Away and A Silent Voice. I've recently started going to anime conventions like LVLUP and hope to go to more in the future!
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Sep 19, 2023
To:kazesenken
Honestly Thor with the weapons of death and Lisa with her idiot bf as her practice dummy? Yeah, I could see that LOL & Caisey had everything under control until thoughts of eternal paradise took over 😂
Sep 18, 2023
I'm wrong. Haru kind of liked Kasumi enough to probably date her, but feels loyal to Grace. It's like the reluctant friend zone scenario... which sucks for Kasumi 😓 lol Glad to see Haru realizing that real people and real life don't suck so bad after all!
Poor Haru, thinking about Grace, a dream girl, and worried about not liking a real life girl who tricked him into a date. Kind of sucks considering he knows he can't be around Grace forever, and he's finally gotten used to talking to a real girl but doesn't even like her. Dude's stuck in a limbo 🤦🏿♀️ I like Haru sooo much haha
Sep 16, 2023
Seira makes even the bullies pale in comparison. Shiro's life will definitely shine brighter now!
Gah! What is up with Claire?! She seems motherly but also like she wants to save Jun from something in this universe that had happened to him elsewhere. Before that last sentence, I was assuming that Claire was plotting to have Jun learn how to treat a woman before his chances with Mia inevitably failed, like she had explained to him before. That measley 30%! Then Claire herself would be going for Jun, because I'm suspecting that their stars align perfectly. ... BUT NOW I'm thinking that Claire is going to sacrifice herself in some way for Jun? I need answers 😭
Yay Jun! What a cute first date experience. I chuckled throughout this chapter. Jun did a good job of putting Mia first this time around, especially considering he had asked HER out and not the other way around. I 100% did not expect freaking kelpies when she said she wanted to go ride horses, like GIRL! I think you're missing some important details here 🤣 And Claire at the end... Two thoughts: she completed her job and decided to take her leave after a job well done, OR seeing the date succeed did something to her emotionally 🤔 Must. Read. On. To. Find. Out 🤖😆
I really liked this chapter!! It really puts into perspective the role Jun thinks he's supposed to play as a male in a relationship. Though gently, he's trying to be in control, he's trying to protect and make decisions "for the benefit of" his girlfriend, but he doesn't understand that she can hold her own, or that she has her own opinions and desires. It's obvious that he was just never taught to think that way. Super interesting and meaningful angle to place into a light-hearted and comedic story! Makes me proud of him for already finding 2 things about Mia in only the first date. I wonder what he'll find out next! ☺️
The love sorceress is teaching the you a lesson, Jun!! PAY ATTENTION lolol I hope he learns from whatever mistake he made last time, going to a theater when clearly his date didn't want to go. Because... if that wasn't the loudest hint ever! 🤦🏿♀️ I'm not gonna lie, I'm not rooting for him and this version of Amamiya to succeed romantically. I like when he noticed that he wasn't being himself. That's huge for someone like him 😂
Sep 15, 2023
To:Bradtvford
I'm a sucker for (most) underdog stories! Must be the Naruto syndrome 😂
I know what you mean! I was splitting chapters at first, but couldn't come up with convincing cliffhangers, so some chapters are full ass 2000+ words 😅 LOL
Same!! I wanted to read about Sumire a couple of times in your story, and I also wanted to write about Rina a couple of times in mine! LOL So, I was thinking about writing a short story from Rina's POV, or from an omniscient perspective. Who knows!
Fun ending! I love seeing how Takao's life has turned around completely and that he definitely deserves his new status. I also love how you keptthe story so obviously open for a second novel! Wonder why Sumire was banished?? And what all the conditions for bonding with Takao are?? Great ending 🥰
Applause all around for the adventurers 👏👏 Guild Masterrr!! 😭 lol I'm curious to see when Karou will pop back up. She's surely not done for, especially possessed by the evil thingamajigger... Also, I just remembered. The evil eye said they hoped Sumire would suffer "down here with the rest of us" or something like that. Could it be a powerful human? or a banished immortal? Interesting! Maybe we'll find out in Vol. 2! Also, Kenta is annoying and hilarious 😂
So cool how Takao was able to stand among the strongest adventurers in the guild! That's a super proud moment. I pictured it all epically in my mind lol Team Takao! NOOO Guild Master!! 😭
To:minatika
OHHH 🤦🏾♀️ I totally read "crab"!! Story of my life 🤣 That show looks really familiar! I must have seen it in passing a couple times somewhere, but now I see how Mini Mount Olympus could remind you of Aggro CraG! While not as much as I'd like, we're definitely seeing more of Hades! Trust me, I understand 👀 LOL
