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Avid reader and writer! I love connecting with other writers and readers! I love Harry Potter, Naruto/Shippuden, Spirited Away and A Silent Voice. I've recently started going to anime conventions like LVLUP and hope to go to more in the future!
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Sep 10, 2023
To:minatika
It's from a story I wrote a long, long time ago! I don't even know what happened to it anymore 😭 Yes, definitely an uncommon trope. Probably will gain some ground now that you've published this web novel, though! :D
BIG baka 🤣
Sep 09, 2023
To:Keritoq
Caisey didn't either lol
Sep 08, 2023
I really enjoy your attention to the characters' words and emotions. The writing in general could use some reworking, but I genuinely like reading about how Shiro just wants someone to care about him, and how he wonders how much pain hides behind the brilliant Seira's smile 🥰 Seira's also a lovely character! Shiro's lucky to have someone brave enough to call out the rude bullies as soon as she gets there. I wonder what happened in her past!
Pretty sure Madame Claire is a victim of a lost love and decided to dedicate her life to giving others power to reclaim theirs? Also, I don't know how Jun feels okay with having just ANY Amamiya. I think I'd be even more depressed about having to literally travel dimensions to get someone to love me 🤣
Sep 07, 2023
I find it awesome to see another story featuring monetarily valuable stands of hair! I thought it was a strange idea (I wrote of one unusual girl with golden hair), but I guess it's not! I love how well it works in your story lol Luckily MC understands now that he's in a whole parallel universe now! But I am curious by Claire's revelation(?) that his "stars" are more of a challenge to align... Wondering what this leads to!
Does he really think this is a dream?! Come on, man. You met the Love Sorceress in real life, end up in some strange world, and the sorceress says that she 'did' what you asked. How much more evidence do ya need? 🤦🏾♀️ lol Also, I'm fully expecting Amamiya to say no to his proposal
What an intriguing first chapter! All of Jun's past girlfriends said the same thing: that he doesn't listen? Sounds like we have a habitual mistake-maker on our hands lol Also, I think of Hiroyuki stepping into a world not knowing what he got himself into, but even I don't know what'll happen after his world "went dark" at the end there. Interesting!
To:kazesenken
I can see that! LOL
While I'm pretty "good" at comedy, melodramatic angst is actually my go-to genre to write, if that helps! lol
What... in the world 😂 Haru's got himself a nice pair of friends in Daichi and Koichi. Always need someone to look out for you when you can't do it yourself!
I think this is my favorite chapter so far (even over Haru and his friends being messy at the cake bar hahah). Grace's emotions were tangible here and really made me think about Haru growing up and finding a place in reality that he wants to be. Heavy. That sucks 😢 lol
Gods like Skadi and Ares certainly have a different agenda than the more sane ones 😂 I think you're on to something! You'll find out in about 3 chapters lol
Don't read my mind like that! 🤣 I seriously wanted the gods to be strange and embarrassing creatures that would do some flash mob sequences but held back. Think I made a good decision LOL I think Hades might've been the one driven off a ledge with "what is love?" though 😂
Sep 06, 2023
And the drama begins! I'm actually glad this development started this early into the story, helps keep the storyline fresh. Haru now knows he can't view things with rose-colored lenses anymore or take Grace for granted! He needs some Sherlock in him, find out who or what Grace really is 🕵♂️