Aug 16, 2022
lmaooo love Lily and her enthusiasm! I especial love the "My haret baet faetsr!" XDDD
I agree with Arashi Sensei about the English. However, don't lose your enthusiasm and energy! Don't be disheartened!
It's easier to learn proper grammar than to learn to write with the kind of captivating energetic voice that you have. Therefore, write however you like, and when you learn more grammar stuffs, go back and correct. That's why we have revisions UwU!
But honestly sometimes, *whisper* I'd rather read your high energy super funny story even with some grammatical errors than a well written but stuffy piece of writing *whisper* XD
Keep it up \o/! :D!!