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Aug 16, 2023

I didn't read it but I'm pretty sure your not supposed to take an official Light Novel cover and use it. Lmao.

Healing Hearts in the Realm of Radiance

Chapter:0

Jul 28, 2023

Idk why I laughed at the bacon burger 👍

Kicks & Bows

Chapter:8

Jul 10, 2023

Suzuki don't worry your literally just got into middle school. Ur job is to make dumb mistakes and learn from them.

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:4

Jul 10, 2023

Suzuki is a teenage boy fr fr lol. Good work here.

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:3

Jul 10, 2023

Well, well. If it isn't the consequences of my own actions, good job Suzuki if not for the summary of the plot you would've been screwed. I quite like the way you wrote for there to be a genuine good reason why Suzuki had to summon the succubus. Instead of starting it right off the bat you took your time and introduced us to everything. Well done.

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:2

Jul 10, 2023

Not a bad prologue. It goes right into the meat of the plot, introduces our protagonist, some side characters, and background for the setting. All greatly done in under 1,500 words. Also he's me for real I too can barely make rice in a rice cooker 😭

If you have the time, come on down and give my story a read n like. Good work looking forward to seeing where this goes.

One Month to Figure out my Future

Chapter:1

Jul 10, 2023

Bold of Suzuki to assume I'm normal. lmao

He's me fr fr

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:1

Jul 10, 2023

the transition into first person was a nice touch.

Hanako won’t Grant my Wish!

Chapter:0

Jul 09, 2023

Overall a good story with a very interesting premise, looking to see where you go and take this.

If you have the time please check out my story too. If not that's okay!

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:5

Jul 09, 2023

Kia is just showing off the good and hella attractive vibes ain't she?

Once Rejected, I'm Now Adored as a Hero

Chapter:2

Jul 09, 2023

Ey Half-Demon or part demon girl.

I liked the action you gave enough details to allow a person's imagination to form the scene. I'm invested to see where this story goes.

Once Rejected, I'm Now Adored as a Hero

Chapter:1

Jul 09, 2023

AH SHOOT I FORGOT TO COMMENT ON THIS.

I liked it good start to your story! Also It's an interesting as heck choice for you to make an Elf the Demon Lord. This is the first time I've seen that happen.

Once Rejected, I'm Now Adored as a Hero

Chapter:0

Jul 07, 2023

Aw shoot sorry for doing this as a separate but if you have the time please come over to my story and give it a read. 😘

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:4

Jul 07, 2023

To:Feristah

Throughout the entire chapter you could've placed commas in certain sentences to make them flow better, another mistake would be at the beginning of the chapter where you wrote "It graduated". I think you wanted "I graduated".

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:3

Jul 07, 2023

Ngl that megaphone scene would've been gold as another has said 😂

Found You, My Bride [will be posted later]

Chapter:4

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