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Trying my best to portray my worldview through writing.
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Nov 12, 2023
Interesting take on the prompt given. I feel like if it is longer, the story might be able to portray the mental problems that MC faces better but alas, word limit prevents it haha. Good read and good luck for next round!
To:Saika
Thank you for the kind comment! Good luck for you too!
This is a good read. I enjoyed your interpretation of the prompt. Goodluck for the next round!
Nov 11, 2023
Wow, this is a really fun spin-off from the original prompt. I've read a lot of story from the POV of the girl but yours are the one that I like the most. Good job and good luck for the next stage!
Nov 10, 2023
Interesting concept. The idea and story are great however there are some grammatical issues and awkward sentences that could be improved further. I hope I don't sound too harsh haha but it is still a fun story to read.
To:Polymorphe
Thanks! I tried to bring message about the positivity of life amidst all the story that focuses on the suffering of the death. I'm glad you enjoyed my story!
Nov 09, 2023
Interesting take on the famous demon lord-hero dynamic. I feel like the conversation between them when they shouted at each other could be explored much longer to highlight their conflict better. Nevertheless, it was an enjoyable read. Goodluck for the next stage!
A really interesting story. I enjoyed the immense deep meaning behind the seemingly ordinary actions the story is portraying. Goodluck for this competition!
Wow this is quite good. I love the story from the perspective of the gods instead of the usual story from the point of view of humans, it helps characterise them even further.
Interesting concept. I really love this type of plot where you know you're dying so you ought to make the most out of life. At first I thought the princess gonna run away with MC or something else but wasn't expecting the MC to die with the princess. An enjoyable read if I do say so myself
Nov 04, 2023
To:Memora
Ah, that's so sweet! Thank you so much !
Haha I'm glad to be able to do that. That is kind of one of the purpose for me to write this story along this route. Thank you !