Jul 03, 2023
Having read to this point, I just wanted to share my thoughts in a more complete manner:
This is the kind of ambient romance that I love- the kind that brings to mind "springtime of youth" and makes you wistful for an undefined time in your past- even if those are experiences you never had. Your writing is very evocative. It's not too flowery or melodramatic- it captures the spirit of the work perfectly.
I love your characters, I think that they're both likable in the limited amount of time we've been given to establish them. The one thing that raised my eyebrows slightly was- this seems a little fast-paced, in both their relationship and otherwise. But oh well, such are the consequences of a word limit.
I've really loved reading and am looking forward to new chapters!