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Winner of the MAL x Honeyfeed Writing Contest 2024 ~Anime Foundation Meets WIT Studio~ ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦

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Jun 05, 2023

To:Kya Hon

Rie Takahashi had it right when she encouraged deodorant. Life saving stuff.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

This is almost a 1:1 of my first couple convention experiences from the 2nd guessing wearing a cosplay outside the CC, and the heinous line forming inside. Perhaps the most relatable, showing up by myself with thousands of others and wanting to go home lol

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

Camden asking the real questions? “Is this doxxing?” YES it is 😭 The plot thickens with Patrick’s hint/privacy breach. I hope things don’t work out too badly for Astella…

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

Both of our MC’s are from Hokkaido, that’s awesome ❄️ I’m glad that he quickly addressed his actions in the previous chapter, and Alto is definitely starting to feel the emotions. Very cute!

Fluffy like a Cumulus

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

Their character dynamic is something I really enjoy. You can tell that even in impatience, she’s actually a pretty compassionate person. She wouldn’t have saved him otherwise. I like both leads a lot so far.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:4

Jun 05, 2023

The amount of comedic depth in the general’s name is awesome. God bless America 🇺🇸

Maniavolution

Chapter:5

Jun 05, 2023

Double commenting, but I did want to note that the chair glitch unlocked a memory of playing banjo kazooie nuts and bolts 🔩 and using the flying glitch to get over barriers. Very nostalgic.

Maniavolution

Chapter:4

Jun 05, 2023

I gotta admit, as much as I feel bad for the new players the wooden ladder idea took some real ingenuity 😂 I respect it.

Maniavolution

Chapter:4

Jun 05, 2023

Quite an ungrateful commander after all Chika went through to help, but it turned out for the best. Reading this is unlocking a core memory of Samurai Jack for some reason when I was a kid, and the intrigue that I had for it. I like the first two chapters a lot!

Enchanted by a Witch From a Realm Called Earth

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

To:Harmonica Writes

A super duper casual one, but you can use my seal if you’d like 😂

Maniavolution

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

I didn’t get to mention this in my last comment, but his self-preservation skills are less than stellar running towards a weird sound amongst all the dead. 😆 High action on this one, very nice.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

Jumping into this chapter, I loved how vivid your descriptions were. With the creature in particular. Dark Fantasy is my favorite genre so I really don’t mind this kind of set-up before the wholesome comes later. I’m curious as to how you’ll manage it.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

Keith has NBA draft dreams?, I wish him luck. He might be the center my blazers need. 🏀

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:4

Jun 05, 2023

The cute library scenario 📚 and props for the MJ reference.

I would consider restructuring the first couple paragraphs to not sound as mechanical, and redundant. The word “basketball” is the used five times within the first two paragraphs. I liked the chapter though!

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:3

Jun 04, 2023

“As a friend” I see you, Hanako. 😏 I really like their chemistry, and the world-building you’ve got brewing with Dominion. Real Black Mirror-type stuff. Hope they get some more time together.

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:2

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