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Jun 18, 2023
I think it’s safe to say that this was the best chapter yet. You have nice progression on the wholesome romance, and perhaps a little supernatural element at the end? 🦊
There’s something really funny about an overpowered cult of players paying respect to an amogus character, and even more so that Alice doesn’t want to mess with them. 😂 I have to give this chapter a 10/10 for the Steve Jobs-Ligma reference, it made me think of the Thanos version.
Really wasn’t expecting to feel emotional so early in the morning, but here I am 🥲 Also didn’t expect such a tender chapter with the title, but at least Alice can still crack s3x jokes. Just hope she’s ok.
Haru acting like a micro-celebrity, and Hayasaka acting like a mob boss all in one small outing 😆 The ‘meeting the parents’ event, she sure doesn’t play around. The Doki Doki reference is just the icing on the cake of a really entertaining chapter 🍰 but will he be able to talk-no-jutsu her dad…?
Even though we don’t know a ton about the leads just yet, this intro was full of character despite it being a short one to start. ☔️
Jun 17, 2023
I really love the writing style you’re going with in this first chapter. It’s really giving me major Hyouka vibes with how curious Ryota seems to be (and mention of mysteries ⁉️) I love it already.
He can count himself safe from that Miss Iwamoto @ss whooping… for now. 😆 Yeah Ace, playing video games… that’s also what I was thinking… 🎮 Nice drama there at the end to set up for what’s next.
I’m happy to finally be able to start this one. A sudden thing to spring on someone at the end, I wonder if our MC is the type to agree to something like taking in a runaway? I agree that playing with the space on the page by breaking up paragraphs would be a good idea. Overall a nice start, I like the imagery. 🚂
I like the solid mix of gang story mixed with the wholesome romance that you’re developing. I’ve read quite a few stories so far, but yours stands out as striking a really nice balance. It looks like the members of the group date found their own little romance too 💖
Even if Shinji can’t fully be trusted, it’s true that he saved Akari and Ryochi in his own way. I do agree that they should tread carefully, but interested to see what he means by “get to know them better”. Is his end-game to try to recruit Akari into the Vipers? I’m looking forward to seeing what will happen going forward.
We get a bunch of McWholesomeness 🍔 and a look at our main Mami at the end. I thought the reactions were all pretty cute, nice first chapter.
I like the Einstein quote 🧠 And it looks like the seniors and juniors quickly settled their differences, and are coming together as a team. Which is necessary if they want to win games together going forward.
Alice was right. So the cycle continues, and he has another favor to repay. I’m really not sure what to make of Konya. He’s a complex individual. I want to like him, but I’d like to find out his true motivation first.
I remember when I went to physical therapy for my knee after a football injury, and all the stress tests I had to do. Though, I didn’t have a cute girl to help me through. Count your blessings, Ichiro!
Things are about to get pretty complicated for Thelian, and I have no doubt Chika can give him a run for his money. Even despite his own brilliance. I really like the emperor, he seems like the kind of guy that enjoys life no matter what is thrown his way. Even poison. 🧪