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Jun 14, 2023

I sent my comment before I read the last couple lines, but I’m glad he went with the purple flowers. It shows that he has been paying attention to Emma. It seems we’ll learn more about her in the next installment. 😭

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:8

Jun 14, 2023

My favorite character makes her triumphant return.. Miss Iwamoto I’ve missed you 💐 Congrats on overcoming the smut allegations, this chapter was very cute. You can’t go wrong with roses.

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:8

Jun 14, 2023

We got the origin story of the clovers, and the beginning of Akio’s Ailurophobia ☘️ Cute chapter, and very sweet of Hikari to share his treats with the others.

Ailurophobia

Chapter:4

Jun 14, 2023

Kruaal — Cruel (I see what you did there 😁) It didn’t sound like the most fun life, but he did assemble a harem. So good for him. This chapter can sate the requirement for isekai by dealing with reincarnation, but I like that you did it in an entertaining way. It doesn’t feel thrown in, and it explains how his values remain similar between lives. Well done.

The Youngest Court Mystic And the Mischievous Twin Princesses

Chapter:3

Jun 14, 2023

We got a beach chapter 🏝️ (sort of) I am curious about the kid. On what grounds did Oliver suppose that he wasn’t human? I guess that confused me a bit, but a fun chapter!

On the run with a witch from another world

Chapter:10

Jun 14, 2023

I love the comraderie between drummers 🥁 Just an instant connection. Music is the way to my heart and like the other entries that have dove into it, you have captured my attention. Nice first chapter!

Purple Prose

Chapter:1

Jun 13, 2023

It’s really nice to see Keith overcome being so down on himself and Carlos being a good buddy to help him realize it 🏀 Most of all, it seems like Jessica left a huge impression on him. I look forward to seeing him climb up the rotation.

Would You Paint My Dunk

Chapter:8

Jun 13, 2023

I really like the developments in this chapter. You’re starting to get the wholesome romance aspect down, and Nao and Takashi are really cute. Even though they got thwarted by the umbrella gang at the end lol ☂️

Our Greatest Comeback: Thanks to your beautiful light

Chapter:7

Jun 13, 2023

Og-dog with the self-awareness to apologize for mispeaking right away? 🏆 Gotta give him one of these. Felt a big jump in chemistry between them in this chapter, and it helped rekindle my love for bowling. Win/Win.

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:6

Jun 13, 2023

The streets told me there was more 🅱️idgeon, so here I am. Does B-dog stand for “Bandit” because what is that song title??? 😭

Pigeon on a Power Line

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2023

I’ll never forget the first crepe I had in Japan… so good 😩 but where can I find these cake buffets?? 🍰 As long as I don’t eat as much as Haru I should be fine…

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:5

Jun 13, 2023

Kya touched on it, but I like how natural and real the conversations feel between characters. There seem to be quite a few of them. I think in the long run, giving a select few at a time to marinate might give readers a better sense of who people are. Really solidly written chapter.

To you, A Lei of Daisies

Chapter:4

Jun 13, 2023

Seeing the character growth already is genuinely exciting to read. 👏 I’m finally understanding what you meant by “language” a few chapters ago. This might be the first time I’ve seen love languages be seriously addressed in a romance story in this format. I have fully warmed up to Jun as an MC (he’s a much nicer elf than Cedrick that’s for sure) 😂 Reading this did, in fact, brighten my day.

With a Love Sorceress I'll Make My Romance Last!

Chapter:6

Jun 13, 2023

“I’m in your walls” is how I also would have responded. We got the great meeting of the minds in this chapter, THE group chat of all time. Still don’t know who Estella is, but we have school camp coming up 🏕️ I respect the build-up for the reveal.

The Vtuber Next Door

Chapter:6

Jun 13, 2023

OK, I understand now. It took me a minute to realize that we had a perspective change to Konya after he helped Kiyoshi. You may** try to either introduce him as Konya early in the chapter to avoid confusion for the reader, but only if you’d like. Kaze already covered that above though, nice chapter.

Cursed Lines

Chapter:4

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