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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Jun 03, 2023
Fear without understanding can make entire communities of people do dumb stuff. At least our MC seems to think for himself.
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I was totally thinking of Rin too!! Especially the cute smirk, and bluntness. 😆 Either way, I liked the interactions. Reminded me of playing lol
Ace is lucky Miss Iwamoto didn’t enact decades of old lady Justice on him, but we know he’s actually a softie.
A spawn camper meets a game breaker, but even more wholesome. I like their interactions so far, it works so well.
Reminds me of back when I was in uni, except I stopped playing football after Highschool. The schoolwork was too overwhelming 😅
The MC seems like a very dapper gentleman. At first I thought it was a lead in for the isekai prompt, but now I’m interested to see when the leads meet-up.
The mystery and suspense building in this one 👀 I always love a good conspiracy plot. It was written pretty solidly, and you’ve got a unique concept.
Jun 02, 2023
Emma is a real one ☝️
We both have a best friend named Jun. Jun gang 😎
Good start! There’s a lot of empty space at the bottom of the page though just an FYI.
~Cat pastries emitting rainbows 🌈 ~ That sure takes me back. I like the imagery so far, very wonderland with a twist.
This just re-enforces my opinion that if I ever gained fame for my music or otherwise, I would remain anonymous. Fan culture can be wild sometimes.
I love the hook at the end! With the perspective I was wondering who the MC was, but I’m looking forward to what happens next.
This is well written character dialogue, good start! 😄 Reed addresses my only concern at the very end about the nonchalantness.
Jun 01, 2023
As a music producer myself, this is right up my alley. I love that his dad is supportive of his dreams. 🎵 Like Steward said, this is also cleaner than the original. Nice work.
Seeing this evolve has been nice. This is an example of when jumping into the action is done well. Good start!
