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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Jun 09, 2023
> Scooby doo meme.
> Splitting up to look for clues.
That is just some peak referencing right there, my friend.
Is Patrick the Ayanokoji of their class? Nice set-up chapter, and I have to agree with Kaiden *bad feeling about this intensifies*
Congrats on the first post! I can just feeeel the awkwardness for poor Majima, but Mia still came in clutch at the end. 🤝
I can really sense a love for basketball in your writing. I’ve watched and enjoyed it for a long time too. I see that Sean is the Jordan of the team 👀
I see that you rearranged some material, and I think it has really benefitted your pacing. Also the world building you’ve got going on is great. It’s nice to see Chiyo and Oliver venture out now, great stuff. 👏
The Grace route, hmm? 😏 These chapters always fly by when I read them, super enjoyable as usual.
Starting off with a bit of an emotional hook and a look into the psyche of Yuta. I also hope the maid succeeds in melting away his personal trouble, and we get to learn more about it.
Continuing where the last chapter left off. I just gotta say, I love Naruse’s personality. It’s pompous in the most hilarious way possible. Also that’s a quick end to his secret otaku identity 📸 glasses got him good! But will she spill the beans…?
“Distressed Ikemen Pose” I love it 😂 and I also quite enjoy how you introduce each character, and the natural sounding dialogue. In my head I picture time freezing and their name popping up on the screen like in an anime. How long can Naruse keep his Otaku secret? I’m interested to find out.
Nice chapter. We get a look into Ren a bit more in this chapter. I’m curious what the deal is with his upbringing.
Jun 08, 2023
I’m very happy that they’ve got names that I can refer to in comments now lol. I love the slow burn going on. I do feel bad for Dawn, a year is a LONG time.
Man, she really wasn’t very appreciate was she? He risked his back and butt for her safety. 10/10 Chad
I feel like Astella is closer than he might think… Also if Patrick is the voice of reason, there’s a problem here 😭
There was a 60 year old body builder in my hometown that sounds like this fella. Ace seems pretty wary of him though, I wonder what happened 🤔
Asura’s “Happy Ending Parlor” is certainly a thought 😭 I like the idea of a VR and AR headset that you can feel things like a back massage, very cool.