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Novelist ✦ Singer and Producer ✦ Isekai Enthusiast ✦ 27/M
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Jun 06, 2023
I really enjoyed the heart-to-heart between Ogden and Anne-Marie. They have more in common than one might think (and I’m quite impressed she was willing to admit her Versace was fake 👠 )
Jun 05, 2023
AI assistant-chan is my early candidate for best girl. 🖥️ I think this achieves a lot for a prologue. You get a really solid idea of the main character, and their struggles. But you also presumably get to jump right in from chapter 1, very nice!
Classic Pip, leaving for all the work but coming back just in time to taunt Ayato. 10/10 trolling.
She got Ayato good with that chick pun. 🐣 He should have known better, this is no ecchi!
Really solid start! I like your writing style, everything flows incredibly well. It’s fine for Yan to apply some of his romance expertise.
I almost went to Hirosaki park during my trip to Japan a couple weeks ago, but I couldn’t make it to Aomori. Perhaps next time 🌸 You did a good job of explaining how he’d get back in unnoticed.
The framing for this one is so so good. It might just be the big part of me that relates to his situation, but it was an emotional read. It’s really easy to get into your own head like that, especially when you’re crowd anxious. You got something cooking.
To:Kya Hon
Rie Takahashi had it right when she encouraged deodorant. Life saving stuff.
This is almost a 1:1 of my first couple convention experiences from the 2nd guessing wearing a cosplay outside the CC, and the heinous line forming inside. Perhaps the most relatable, showing up by myself with thousands of others and wanting to go home lol
Camden asking the real questions? “Is this doxxing?” YES it is 😭 The plot thickens with Patrick’s hint/privacy breach. I hope things don’t work out too badly for Astella…
Both of our MC’s are from Hokkaido, that’s awesome ❄️ I’m glad that he quickly addressed his actions in the previous chapter, and Alto is definitely starting to feel the emotions. Very cute!
Their character dynamic is something I really enjoy. You can tell that even in impatience, she’s actually a pretty compassionate person. She wouldn’t have saved him otherwise. I like both leads a lot so far.
The amount of comedic depth in the general’s name is awesome. God bless America 🇺🇸
Double commenting, but I did want to note that the chair glitch unlocked a memory of playing banjo kazooie nuts and bolts 🔩 and using the flying glitch to get over barriers. Very nostalgic.
I gotta admit, as much as I feel bad for the new players the wooden ladder idea took some real ingenuity 😂 I respect it.