Aug 22, 2023

Lucian is a pretty reasonable guy, when you get down to it. Letting them walk out like that was hilarious. 😆

Now that Arno's free, his plans of world domination may commence! I'm sure Erika will somehow mess that up. lol

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Aug 22, 2023

I think I've mentioned this before, but Madam Claire's limitations make her into a believable and relatable character. She manipulates the game, but could easily mess up and become a player herself. Maybe something above her is pulling her strings too?

I really want to know her past, and how she connects to Roki!

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Aug 22, 2023

I don't know why, but this chapter really touched me. Maybe it was the idea of letting go of someone you loved? Accepting a new person after all the previous investmen?

It hit when Roki mentioned he didn't want to lose Amamiya's family part. We build up connections with people, and the things around them, only to lose them for one reason or another. Just the idea is so melancholy that it makes me think humans are too complicated for love.

But I don't mean to be a downer! Just wanted to share my thoughts! (It's a good thing the chapter got me feeling!) 😅

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Aug 21, 2023

To:minatika

::More speculation incoming!::

I definitely think Madam Claire, in all her power and wisdom, has a strong attachment to Roki. I'm really leaning toward her feelings being more then platonic, especially with how they both seem to hint at having feelings for one another, even if not fully realized or subtly. (I support this ship!) She has a deep care for him for some reason, but why? Did she even know he existed before they met? (Maybe the Stars told her?)

I can't imagine she just learned about him and overnight decided to test him. This is something she's been planning in her pocket for a while. Or maybe not, and she's taken a leap of faith in trusting some fortune she read.

So many pieces I'm missing! (And maybe I'm putting the wrong puzzle together lol)

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Aug 21, 2023

The tension of a rival love sorcerer is real! Just the thought of some hidden magic user altering fate alongside Madam Claire's work is kinda spooky!

Admittedly though, I feel bad for Mia. She's really a plaything for these sorcerers to create a love triangle. And to what end? I wonder what they all stand to gain. 🤔

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Aug 21, 2023

If Mia had been a catgirl, I'm afraid Roki would have lost it 🤣

Looks like the competition has begun! I wonder how Toren will react when he finds out Roki is an Elf.

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Aug 20, 2023

The rumor machine never stops chugging! And let me tell you, it's just as off as always!

Poor Mia, getting bad mouthed like that. So uncouth!

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Aug 19, 2023

I like how you set a precedence for what a gold coin is worth in a little village.

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Aug 19, 2023

Oooooh! I have a prediction coming along for sure! 🤭

But wait! W-what was that end part?! 😬

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Aug 19, 2023

To:Valentine

There's always a bigger fish, as they say! Suddenly, Charlie feels reasonable by comparison. Lol

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Aug 19, 2023

To:minatika

It definitely feels realistic, since like 90% of problems in relationships start with communication issues. So focusing on that was a good move!

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Aug 18, 2023

That's all, folks! What a ride this has been to write! A lot has happened over the last few months, and I'm glad this was part of it!

I don't know if contest entries are allowed to have sequels, but I'd love to do more stories with these characters. Look forward to more Luna in the future! 😁 Maybe some artwork of her too, so check out my deviantart! (Link in my Twitter Bio!)

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Aug 17, 2023

What a first date! Well, first date for the second time. Lol
Much more exciting then a movie, but the thrill might be a bit more dangerous.

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Aug 17, 2023

Ooof! He took on the work for her, thinking it was a kind gesture, but he really just separated them! Couples work side by side, or they get to detached.

He's such a good person, but it definitely makes sense that this caused a rift with Amamiya. (Although, I think Amamiya had other things going on in her life too that he didn't know about, so we can't blame everything on him)

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Aug 17, 2023

To:minatika

:: Incoming speculation! ::

My thinking is : I feel like Mia and Amamiya aren't going to be the right picks for Roki. 😖

I think it's my intuition, but a guy like him who wears his heart on his sleeve and tries so hard to have someone fall in love with him deserves someone who sees that and appreciates it (or tames it.) I think a third player will join the game of love and show genuine care for him.

I could be totally off! Maybe I'm just crazy and coming up with something silly! Lol! 🤪

Can't wait to see if my theory holds up or not!

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