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Jul 26, 2023
So Megu is happy, good for him. _________ Nice to see Haru and Kasumi finally being a thing after all the teasing. _________ And 42 thousand views? Haru's parents would be appalled, why not 42 million? You bring shame on the family!
To:Christian Widjaya
The Transformers: More than Meets the Eye
Was just the first thing that came to mind, don't worry, could be worse, one of my chapter titles shares a name with a BL manga. (Which was unintended.)
Autobots, transform and roll out! jk.
What a revelation though.
Jul 25, 2023
Nice. It might have really mostly been the tense that threw me off in the earlier chapters. I did read that it is harder to write well using present tense, but I didn't think it would make that much of a difference.
Jul 24, 2023
Awww their behavior is just adorable. Especially that yukata scene.
Ha, spotted the antinatalist!
Glad Keith sees it as a learning experience, instead of letting it pull him down.
To:Pernodi
No problem. The other commenters didn't catch it either, so don't worry. If there were a couple more pargraphs, or the two sentences were in different chapters, I might not have noticed it either.
Jul 23, 2023
Panic!
Okay, slight comment here before reading on. How come Elegast asks what mana is, then says that there is no mana nullification barrier like he knows it for a fact?
Better luck next time Oliver.
Yay, the plot thickens. Finally some info on the mark.
Will be interesting to see if anyone recognizes it as an existing melody. If so, Haru might have heard it before, or Grace has other means of getting experiences from the outside world. Either way, very intriguing.
Jul 22, 2023
"Senior Takumi senior" and the 'drink' dialog/exchange are a little weird. Otherwise pretty easy to follow.
Jul 21, 2023
Ah, now we are getting somewhere...
