Jun 05, 2023
It's a decent start, but personally I'm not really into overly peppy male characters, especially if it's the MC. Somehow there's a certain forced feeling here, perhaps on purpose, seeing as there are hints about some tragedy in the siblings' past.
The writing is solid. I didn't notice any typos or grammar errors, and it feels like you're a somewhat experienced writer. Not much else to say, I'll move on to the next chapter now...