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Jun 04, 2023
To:Pernodi
I'm aware of the vast exposition on this chapter, but the town is a place we'll explore in future chapters so I wanted to depict it clearly. But you're right, it might be kind of repetitive. I'll try to think of a way to shorten it. Thanks!
Sure, don't sweat it!
Thanks for the help! I'd love to read your opinion on the next chapters too.
Thanks for the comment! I have the whole story already plotted, so I just have to write it. Procrastination is always a bummer, though. About the chapter, what did you think about the pace? Was it too slow or dense?
Your prose makes it not boring at all and fun to read. I always have problems with that. How do you make things flow so naturally?
As a fellow competitor for the category, I really like your way of writing. The idea of the protagonist being a character of the world instead of the isekaied girl is really original!
To:Chika san
Thank you for taking the time to like and comment <3 I'm glad you like it.
To:Wolliven
Thank you! Keep reading and you'll see haha
To:Ittsmikey
Thanks I guess lol
Thanks!!
To:Syed Al Wasee
Thank you for your comment! I hope you can continue reading.
To:Harmonica Writes
Thanks a lot for your comment! I'm somewhat worried because it's not the typical isekai story and that may put some people off, but I really like this story a lot, and I hope to accurately portray everything that is to come. I'd love to see you around here!
I assumed this was a prologue due to the philosophical ideas and the eerie scene. I don't have much of an idea of what the story is about but we'll see in the next chapters. Keep up the good work!
