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Jun 05, 2023

To:SarahLynn

Thanks I guess XD

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

To:SarahLynn

Thanks for the comment! I'm working on that, I'll try to make it less dense in the editing.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

To:Pearlyn.M

Yeah, I've been told that the narration feels disconnected from the character before. I don't really know how to fix it, but I'll work on it. Thank you for your feedback <3, though I'd love it if you could read the next two, where characters start interacting with each other.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

To:Bubbles

Thanks for the feedback, Bubbles!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

To:kazesenken

Thanks for the feedback, it's really useful. I've had problems with descriptions connected to the characters for a long time. I'll try to work on that. About the love thing, it'd be wonderful if you could read the next chapters because it's where the pace starts to pick up.

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

To:Kitsune

Guess the eagerness to find someone surpassed his self-preservation instinct XD

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:3

Jun 05, 2023

I love the idea, but I'm not sure where you're trying to go for.The MC is really charismatic and even though the sarcastic and otaku-like trope is kind of used already, you've added your own twist with the whole dream thing. I like that the reality is too much for him and he just chills in his dreams. Your prose is on point and your descriptions too. Man, everyone here is so talented it makes me depressed XD. Maybe the prologue was too ethereal for me, but the first chapter works just fine so it doesn't bother at all. I'll keep reading!

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

To:Kitsune

Thanks for appreciating it, though it’s true the first two chapters can be too heavy on the descriptions

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 05, 2023

Great start! It seems more like a 1984 type novel than a romance Isekai, but we'll see haha.

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:1

Jun 05, 2023

To:Lihinel

Thanks, really! I'll work on that!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2023

To:Kitsune

Glad you liked it! Now that you say it, that part is kind of similar to Re:Zero, but I think the similarities between stories end there. I hope you keep reading to see what happens next!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:1

Jun 04, 2023

Emma reminds me a lot of Marinette from Miraculous Ladybug. Was it coincidential?

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:3

Jun 04, 2023

Ace is the chillest guy. Really funny story!

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2023

To:Pernodi

I had no idea! I'll look it up, thanks!

The Isle of the Forgotten

Chapter:2

Jun 04, 2023

Asexual writer and the MC's name is Ace. Simply magnificent XD. Also, the chapter was great. Had me laughing more times than I'm willing to admit. I really like your sarcastic and exaggerated comedy. I'll keep reading!

The Love of My Life, Miss Workaholic!

Chapter:1

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