Jun 05, 2023
I love the idea, but I'm not sure where you're trying to go for.The MC is really charismatic and even though the sarcastic and otaku-like trope is kind of used already, you've added your own twist with the whole dream thing. I like that the reality is too much for him and he just chills in his dreams. Your prose is on point and your descriptions too. Man, everyone here is so talented it makes me depressed XD. Maybe the prologue was too ethereal for me, but the first chapter works just fine so it doesn't bother at all. I'll keep reading!
