Aug 07, 2023
To:minatika
Thank you so much for reading it to the end! Honestly, if it weren't for you, I probably would have gave up way earlier but your comments motivated me to see it through the end. Overall, I'm definitely not satisified with it since I felt I had to rush it. My least favourite part is the flashback that starts at around chapter 20, I originally planned for it to be way bigger and flesh out Esmeralda and Arthur's relationship but then I realized there was literally no way I'd be able to do that so I ended up rushing it and it clearly shows since there was that huge timeskip lol. I've also got a lot of other issues, but the most important thing is that I ended up managing it to finish it regardless, which I think makes this the first ever piece of writing that I've seen through to the end lol, even though it was mostly just for one reader. But honestly, I realized that just one reader is all I needed, so thank you so much, once again. And I can't wait to read the rest of your novel, easily my fav of the ones I've read, so I hope you win the contest. Good luck!