Jun 07, 2023
It's very fast paced. As someone who's work is also fast paced, I will say that isn't a bad thing at all. I would suggest maybe adding some more detail to give a better idea of what's happening, cause it can definitely be confusing when there isn't enough detail. I do like how reminiscent the reinarnator is of Aqua and Konosuba, it bodes well for my enjoyment of this story.