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Jun 15, 2023
very comfortable read. I especially had a good time when I turned on the music. I can see why it's gotten so popular this contest. I'm hoping it stays this good, I hear it will be picking up as I go.
Jun 13, 2023
Oooo, I'm very excited to see where next chapter takes us. As for this chapter, you did the panic attack fine don't be too worried about it.
Holy shit. This is incredible Kaze. It's so...well written. It feels like an upbeat dream dancing over my monitor screen. I loved every second of this chapter.
I love it already. Such fluffy prose and fun to read characters. I'm so violently intriqued.
What a sincerely cute chapter. I hope to see more in the future, this is such a warm and fuzzy experience despite its shortcomings.
Well, what an interesting little detective we have here. Things move very fast here, it feels almost like 11 minute segments of cartoons in written form. I'm far from against that vibe though. While the story has issues, I for the most part am enjoying myself.
To:Cherry Star
I'm glad you're enjoying it, I hope you remain pleased with it, hehe
It's absolutely an adorable story. An interesting thing I've found, reading your story while listening to My Time is quite an enjoyable experience. Enhances that kid reading a cozy story experience.
Hmmm, it's interesting. I like the idea of this forging from some ones naïve believability of a lie, but I feel it ends too fast, like it could have made a more dramatic moment later on. There are also a few moments of grammatical errors throughout, but I will say your prose, when describing your characters pastimes and what they're doing is very cozy, it feels like I'm a kid reading in his favorite chair. Take from that what you will.
Jun 12, 2023
A very cute read so far. Everything feels tightly paced and nothing really stands out as outright a flaw. Overall pretty comfy.
Jun 10, 2023
ooo, now things are getting VERY interesting. i look forward to seeing what this girl is about and just seeing more of these friends, they're such a treat to see interact.
To:Shulox
I hope I don't disappoint, thank you for the kind words
it's very interesting. there's something comfy about a group of friends all being together on a bus late at night. i think if i read this chapter again, I'll do it with lo-fi. though I may get so relaxed i go to sleep lmao. regardless, unique and good start.
To:Deleted User
Im sure it was, nerd
To:B3NDEEE
Much appreciated, I hope you continue to enjoy.