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Jun 15, 2023
What a cute relationship that's been formed here. The princesses are so sweet and the mc is so respectable and easy to read. I'm curious to see where things go.
To:Pernodi
It's mostly an attempt to try and advance time between events without it feeling like there's not time being spent with these characters.
Only correct opinion
For real, absolute legend my girl Rimi is.
I did my best, and I'm continuing to with all these chapters, thank you for always being so supportive.
To:Christian Widjaya
Changed the ending up a little to make it a little punchier, thank you for the kind words and critique
To:Geta
absolutely, she is undoubtedly hot as fuck
Another enjoyable read. This is becoming a rather comfortable book to read, I might start using it to cool off during breaks in writing. The soundtrack picks are also really fitting.
Much agreed.
Thank you for such kind words, I hope I continue to write him well, I have a lot of plans for him nyehhee
Another enjoyable chapter. The dram feels a little clunky and fast paced, but I generally have found myself needing to slow down myself so that may jus be leaking into my advice to you.
To:Bubbles
Indeed factual
Very entertaining start. I find the mc's feelings of apathy toward life's circumstances relatable and hope to see how he grows and changes the poor guy.
white hairband guy has a good vibe, I like him already. another good chapter.
Man, this doin numbers to my credibility
