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Jun 15, 2023
To:Pernodi
For real, absolute legend my girl Rimi is.
I did my best, and I'm continuing to with all these chapters, thank you for always being so supportive.
To:Christian Widjaya
Changed the ending up a little to make it a little punchier, thank you for the kind words and critique
To:Geta
absolutely, she is undoubtedly hot as fuck
Another enjoyable read. This is becoming a rather comfortable book to read, I might start using it to cool off during breaks in writing. The soundtrack picks are also really fitting.
Much agreed.
Thank you for such kind words, I hope I continue to write him well, I have a lot of plans for him nyehhee
Another enjoyable chapter. The dram feels a little clunky and fast paced, but I generally have found myself needing to slow down myself so that may jus be leaking into my advice to you.
To:Bubbles
Indeed factual
Very entertaining start. I find the mc's feelings of apathy toward life's circumstances relatable and hope to see how he grows and changes the poor guy.
white hairband guy has a good vibe, I like him already. another good chapter.
Man, this doin numbers to my credibility
I'll be sure to fix that in the future lmao
I need her bubbles
very comfortable read. I especially had a good time when I turned on the music. I can see why it's gotten so popular this contest. I'm hoping it stays this good, I hear it will be picking up as I go.