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Jun 09, 2023
Loving how different this is from everything else I've read. You've got easy to read prose and some powerful abilities with rhymes. I look forward to your next chapter.
Funny, quirky, and well written. I'm honestly loving it. We needed a good comedy, ehehe
Quite honestly very adorable. I don't know If I'm vibing with Ace, but Emma is a darling. Whatever comes next is good if it has more her.
It reads exactly like you'd expect a novel from Sei to read like. I'm interested to see where things end up, especially since the girl is so hot.
I can't say more than I've already said. I've caught up and eagerly await more.
We get some more action this chapter. I feel like action may be what you write best, I always get super invested when it happens. Now, the devil. This is definitely a strong development. I look forward to what's next.
To:Kitsune
I hope so as well, time can only tell hehe
OOOOOO, im so very interested. Getting a chance to see the "villains" backstory is exciting
Very intriguing, I'm interested to see where we go from here. It's a story with a lot of potential anyways.
oh god the club prez is so cute, Ryota is a total mood, and Sato is an absolute beefcake idiot and I love all of them, I need more. I require it to function.
To:Syed Al Wasee
I'm glad you enjoyed
Intriguing. Not enough for me to really comment on, but I really enjoy your rhyme scheme and I'm interested to see where the story goes.
Jun 08, 2023
To:Krozam
Things get much better rather quickly from here, I promise. Chapter 4 is really the turning point climax wise if you can make it that far. Regardless, I appreciate you giving it the time of day.
Good observation, and thank you for the kind words.
To:Albert Dupin
That's fair, the descriptiveness is only really there due to habit an preferring that kind of prose. I'll work on removing it over time.
