Sep 17, 2023
To:minatika
Thanks a lot for reading and making it to the end of the story! Really appreciate it!
I really apologize if the story triggered some sensitive topics. But yeah, I can see your point, how there was a change in tone. Right from the beginning I did want to add some drama, especially revolving socializing issues/topics, be it at home or at school, and just the different perspectives introverts have on the social world. I think it's a nice unique theme that's not ventured into much. I'll admit though, it might not have conveyed that message properly. That was (probably) my initial intentions. But yeah, as you said, some things changed, I made some improvisations and I probably forgot about the main idea.
I really believe there is potential to the idea. There's still a lot of things that can be explored. There was still Sora's side of the story. A romance between two quiet characters is also an interesting chemistry. I think, maybe I focused too much on Hino's problem, cuz it's a message I just wanted to convey (dramatized obviously). Time was also a factor. I find it also somehow hard to to express the 'Silent' moments into words without getting too repetitive. Unless I have insanely good language mastery, a visual form might be better?
But yeah, anyways, it was my first completed story, so I'm not gonna beat myself too hard there. I'm really proud of the Cover and the title, though. I find it really nice. The contents could have been better, I'll admit, but it was a nice experience.
Thank you once again for reading! It means a lot!
![Nanang's Official Cover - 19 August 2023 [Art By: Jean] produced at Garong Studio](https://honeyfeed-novel-images.s3.amazonaws.com/uploads/novel_image/file/12376/cover_thumb_c2c31fde-0078-4010-a46f-a15ac09d401b.jpg)
