Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Dec 08, 2024

    Author's Commentary #282:

    Time to talk about Chapter 282: Chess' worldwide importance.
    This one's a lore dump chapter, and there's a lot to talk about. And the big one is easily the state of the world thanks to the effect of the DESPERs. The fact that Germany's now the German Empire of Prussia, Russia's ruled by a tsar, and England's ruled by fairy chess fanatics probably cued many to the fact that while Earth in this universe does share some parallels with our modern day earth, there are many differences as well. However, one thing I felt I needed to address in the story was the state of Ukraine.

    This is a touchy topic due to current events at the time of writing this, but since Ukraine has such a rich chess history, I felt it needed to be in the story. While I could have taken the safe route and simply decided to have the war not take place in this universe, I felt that wasn't the right way to go about it, thus I went with what I did.

    The war still occurred, but it ended much faster due to the DESPERs. Ukraine does still exist though, but now has chess players as it's army in order to defend itself from Russia. As for why Grigori didn't force the Ukrainian president to cede all of Ukraine to him as part of the wager, it lies in the fact that Grigori sought to build his public image as a peacemaker, and he felt he could just slowly snip away at the land later anyway. Vesna's backstory will also be one of the darker ones in the series o fair warning on whenever it comes up again.

    One other thing I'll mention before moving on to the next discussion topic is that there were many other nations I felt needed to be a part of the Chess Olympics due to either, their rich chess history and or good placement/won medals at the 45th Chess Olympiad. This is what initially drove me to make so many teams, and before I knew it, I had over 40. I doubt I'll be able to have both male and female teams for all the countries, in fact I'll confirm that the number of women's teams including Japan will not exceed 50. This is not to snub all those other teams, but rather it's just too big a task to write all those characters. Remember, each team consists of 5 members and even if you exclude the characters that have already been introduced, that's still a lot of characters to juggle. And that's just on the women's side. I've still got to write out some of the teams on the men's side. But I do think it's important to at least flesh out most of these characters as many of them will return for future arcs.

    Now I'll talk more about the other nations mentioned in this chapter starting with the Neo Kingdom of Egypt. This nation came about mainly because I wanted to have an ancient Egypt-themed nation. And thanks to the DESPERs, some Egyptologists can now live their dream and rule Egypt as pharaohs. As such, this nation's characters will be more on the lighthearted side of things.

    The Neo-Babylonian Empire and the New Kingdom of Simien will be much darker though. Like with Ukraine and Russia, the middle east at the time of writing this, is currently embroiled in conflict. Not wanting to mess with it, I instead decided to just revive Babylonia and have them conquer everything with robots. And in case any wonder why Babylonia has robots, blame Live A Live. To be honest, writing the key characters from these nations is easily one of the most difficult things I've attempted. These characters need to be written as close to perfect as possible otherwise the story suffers. Though this arc won't focus too much on these nations much, though characters from these countries will be introduced in this arc.

    Finally, let's end things on a lighter note by talking about Mongolia. For them, I just wanted a Genghis Khan type character and after listening to way too much Mongolian folk metal, decided to go with it. There will be some interesting things to talk about in regards to Genghis Jad, but I'll save it for when he properly debuts in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 07, 2024

    Author's Commentary #281:

    Time to talk about Chapter 281: The conclusion of the Spain vs Denmark match.
    There's a lot to talk about on this one. First off is the match itself. I originally planned for the game to be between Leyla and Sophia and end in a draw, but I didn't like how the game was turning out so I scrapped it and just had Sophia beat Leyla off-screen. Though Leyla losing, her game and Denmark winning the match was one of my original ideas.

    It was either Leyla drew Sophia and the match ended in a 2-2 tie, or Leyla lost, but Denmark won the match. I went with the latter, mainly so I could highlight the importance of the team aspect. The loss is also all the more stinging for Sophia as she won her game yet her team lost. The Esperanza vs Jane match was also short which was a plus as I didn't want the round to drag on for too much longer. It also features a Saragossa opening which is Jane's go-to opening when playing as White. I've been meaning to feature a game with it and finally got the chance to do so.

    And now, let's talk about the character that spooked Iori. Oh boy, this character is easily shaping up to be one of the most difficult characters to write. And funnily enough, this character led me to create ANOTHER character that will be just as difficult, if not more difficult to write. The latter character has not appeared in the story, but I will reveal that their name has been mentioned, and they will likely appear in this arc. I'll go more in depth on these characters once they're properly introduced in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 07, 2024

    Author's Commentary #260:

    Time to talk about Chapter 260: Banter amongst the Danish team.
    There's quite a bit to talk about as not only are there new characters, but also some references to the 45th Chess Olympiad. We'll start with the characters.

    First off, let's discuss the old faces. Skaberghast is in fact Danish, and the reason for that comes from the fact that skaber means "creator" in Danish. While he was born and raised in Denmark, he currently resides in America, but he has dual citizenship for both Denmark and America.

    As for Wakuta and Retskcirb, they're on the team since they're based of Lego characters. And since Lego is Danish, it makes sense for them to be on the team. Everyone else though is a different story.

    Jern, Sommer, and Leyla are all based off of Fairy Tail characters, those being Gajeel Redfox, Natsu Dragneel, and Lucy Heartfilia, respectively. Julia also takes inspiration from Fairy Tail, being loosely based off of Levy McGarden from the series, though Alice Nakiri from Shokugeki no Soma was actually the bigger inspiration behind her character design. Speaking of which, let's do everyone's bios.

    レイラ・リンガード (Leyla Lynggaard) is how Leyla's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is July 7th, which she shares with Natsu Dragneel from Fairy Tail.

    Her favorite piece is the pawn, as she views them all as bald guys.

    In case it wasn't obvious, Leyla is really into bald guys, especially bald twinks. Luckily for her, Sommer's her exact type, though keep an eye on the love triangle dynamic within the Danish team. While not everyone is in it, there will certainly be one.

    ソマー・リゼロイド (Sommer Lyserød) is how Sommer's name is spelled in katakana. Sommer actually means "Summer" in Danish, while lyserød means "pink". This is fitting since Natsu is literally the Japanese word for Summer and Natsu has pink hair.

    His birthday is July 1st, which he shares with Lucy Heartfilia from Fairy Tail.

    His favorite piece is the knight, since it reminds him of a dragon.

    True to his name, Sommer tends to wear everything in pink. Pink tank top, pink sneakers, pink scarf, only his shorts aren't pink, but beige. As for his hair, it was short, spiky, and crimson before Leyla shaved and waxed it all off.

    イェルン・レヴ (Jern Ræv) is how Jern's name is spelled in katakana. His last name, Ræv, is Danish for "fox".

    His birthday is August 9th, which is the day Levy McGarden's debut chapter in Fairy Tail was released.

    His favorite piece is the rook, since it's the piece most like him.

    Jern doesn't get along well with people which is often why he gets into fights. One big irony about him being based off of Gajeel is that his hair is pink, like Gajeel's rival, Natsu.

    ジュリア・ラヴネトラ (Julia Ravnetræ) is how Julia's name is spelled in katakana. Her surname, Ravnetræ, means "raven tree" in Danish.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is January 23rd, which she shares with Alice Nakiri from Shokugeki no Soma.

    Her favorite piece is the rook, mainly because it reminds her of Jern.

    Much like Levy from Fairy Tail, she is self-conscious about her small breast size, though unlike Levy, will pad out her breasts.

    Now onto the fun Easter egg. In the 45th Chess Olympiad, the first team the Japanese women's team faced was actually France. While I had planned for France to be one of the teams Japan would face in the story, learning that the real-life Japanese women's team faced it 1st in the Chess Olympiad was the main reason I decided to have France be first here. As for the men's team, their first team was actually Tanzania, not Denmark.

    That's all for his commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 06, 2024

    Author's Commentary #280:

    Time to talk about Chapter 280: Surrounded by love.
    The Japan vs Italy match has finally concluded. Once again, Japan fells another strong team with a perfect 4-0 victory and Daria hasn't even played yet. However, the more they win, the harder the opponents will be. This is why Daria's hoping the round 3 opponent will be an easier one as if she can sit that match out, she can play for the remaining rounds without having to worry about the 8-game limit imposed on maestros.

    Speaking of games, the Mimoko vs Laura game has ended in a checkmate. As soon as I saw the checkmate, I knew the game had to be the Mimoko vs Laura game. The king is mated surrounded by pieces, which in Laura's mind equates to a harem checkmate.

    With the match now over, both Japanese teams are done, but the round isn't over just yet. As previously mentioned, things will shift over to one of the other teams to see how things are doing. After that, the round will come to an end and it's back to the dining hall. This also means any more new characters will make their debut soon. Introducing this many new characters is no easy feat as many of them I want to have play roles in future arcs in the story. When I initially planned this arc out, it was actually meant to just be a regular tournament, but watching the 45th Chess Olympiad changed that and made me want to do something inspired by it. I never would have imagined I'd create so many new characters though. Needless to say, there will be many new characters to look forward to in this arc of the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 05, 2024

    Author's Commentary #279:

    Time to talk about Chapter 279: Isabella and Laura.
    As mentioned in the previous commentary, this chapter delves a bit more into Isabella and Laura's characters. It turns out that Isabella had cheated once before in the past, with her reasoning behind it being to raise her elo. She did this as a result of being forced into a DESPER match and being raped as punishment following her loss. This is why Laura was a bit sympathetic to her motivations, but not her actions.

    Laura believes cheating is wrong no matter what, both in games and in love-life. This stems from her being cheated on by the one she once loved more than anyone and as a result, became the woman she is today. Though she does believe in second chances which is why she extended her hand to Isabella.

    However, reality can often be cruel as Isabella has seemingly relapsed into cheating once more. Worse, it appears to be due to the result of losing yet another DESPER match which is also causing her to implicate that her teammate, Margarita, was the one that ordered her to cheat. This puts the entire Italian women's team under suspicion, which could lead to the entire team being disqualified. Needless to say, the true mastermind behind this is nefarious.

    One final thing I'll touch on is the dark side of the DESPERs. They essentially give those skilled at chess the reigns of power to do as they please, which leads to many innocents falling victim to the holder's schemes. The only way to avoid being forced into a DESPER match is to have a higher rating than the one activating the DESPER, but that can be easier said than done. Isabella didn't have a higher rating than both the Desperado that raped her, and the one that's seemingly the mastermind behind this cheating scandal. And I can guarantee, there will be far more instances of how the DESPERs can be abused as the series progresses. These instances though will be on a much larger scale, national-level scale to be more precise. I'm sure some might be able to theorize what this means, and I will give warning, it is dark.

    Now that the backstory is complete, all that remains is for the match against Mimoko and Laura to conclude. I mentioned before that I wanted the match to conclude in the playing hall, and the cheating scandal is the main reason why. Since the match is decided and Laura's losing, Prokrutka decided to allow that game to continue rather than declaring Japan the winner of all it's games for the round, outright. This allows Laura to at least lose the game in the playing hall and have it officially registered. As for the fate of Italian women's team, that will remain to be seen.

    One final thing I will confirm though is that the next chapter won't be the final one for round 2. While the Japan vs Italy match may conclude, there are still some other teams competing in the event. In case it wasn't obvious by all the artwork of the teams I've been uploading, I'm dramatically expanding the series' cast. This is also why I consider this arc to be so important as it will introduce many new characters, some of which will play important roles in future arcs in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 05, 2024

    [Game log #166]

    Here's the game from Chapters 273 and 278 between Iori and Isabella on board 4 in the Japan vs Italy match in round 2 of the Chess Olympics.

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.17"]
    [Round "2"]
    [White "Isabella Elena (2369)"]
    [Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (2444)"]
    [Result "0-1"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nf3 Na6 2. e4 g6 3. d4 c6 4. Nc3 Nc7 5. h3 Bg7 6. d5 d6 7. Be2 Nf6 8. dxc6 bxc6 9. Be3 O-O 10. a4 d5 11. e5 Nd7 12. O-O Nxe5 13. Nxe5 Bxe5 14. Bd4 Bd6 15. f4 Ne6 16. Qd3 Nxf4 17. Qe3 Ne6 18. Rad1 Nxd4 19. Rxd4 Rb8 20. b4 Rxb4 21. Rxb4 Bxb4 22. Na2 Ba5 23. Qg3 Bc7 24. Qa3 Bd6 25. Qe3 Qa5 26. Qd4 Bc5 27. Qf2 Bxf2+ 0-1

    If the game continued:

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.17"]
    [Round "2"]
    [White "Isabella Elena (2369)"]
    [Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (2444)"]
    [Result "0-1"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nf3 Na6 2. e4 g6 3. d4 c6 4. Nc3 Nc7 5. h3 Bg7 6. d5 d6 7. Be2 Nf6 8. dxc6 bxc6 9. Be3 O-O 10. a4 d5 11. e5 Nd7 12. O-O Nxe5 13. Nxe5 Bxe5 14. Bd4 Bd6 15. f4 Ne6 16. Qd3 Nxf4 17. Qe3 Ne6 18. Rad1 Nxd4 19. Rxd4 Rb8 20. b4 Rxb4 21. Rxb4 Bxb4 22. Na2 Ba5 23. Qg3 Bc7 24. Qa3 Bd6 25. Qe3 Qa5 26. Qd4 Bc5 27. Qf2 Bxf2+ 28. Rxf2 Qxa4 29. Nc3 Qb4 30. Nd1 Qe1+ 31. Kh2 Be6 32. c3 Kg7 33. Kg3 Rb8 34. Kh2 Rb1 35. Kg3 a5 36. Kf3 d4 37. cxd4 Rb3+ 38. Ke4 Bd5+ 39. Kf4 Qd2+ 40. Kg4 Be6+ 41. Rf5 Qxd4+ 42. Kg5 h6# 0-1

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    Dec 04, 2024

    Author's Commentary #278:

    Time to talk about Chapter 278: Cheaters never win.
    I'll admit, this would have been a good title for the previous chapter, but I feel it works just as well here. There's actually quite a bit to talk about on this one so I'll start off with the game.

    This is one of the cases where it might help to throw the game into Chess.com's analysis engine as it'll show the eval bar and why Isabella was freaking out when she did. She could only see the eval bar though and not the engine's top moves, which is why she had to guess what move to make, and if she made a wrong one, she freaked out. Iori caught on and that led to her leveling the accusation.

    Iori was winning the game anyway, but decided to accuse Isabella of cheating, not because it was the right thing to do, but because she wanted to be sadistic. As for why Laura acted the way she did, that will be touched on in the next chapter, so I'll save going in depth on her and Isabella until that chapter's commentary.

    As for the match, Japan has won it, so the result of the board 1 game between Mimoko and Laura won't matter in the end, though at least the arbiters decided to let it continue instead of giving Japan the win outright.

    I actually was debating having the match be called in Japan's favor and then have Mimoko and Laura pick up their game elsewhere, but I felt it was better to have the game be allowed to continue so that it ends in the playing hall. With Iceland, only Köfun will be punished since he was caught cheating, and since it was a non-electronic method of cheating, he'll simply be suspended from competitive play until the tournament is over. He will be allowed to still spectate though, but he will be under a watchful eye.

    With Isabella, the matter is more serious as an electronic device was used, and will end up snowballing into something that impacts the entire Italian women's team. I'll elaborate more on this in the commentaries for future chapters.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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