Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Sep 09, 2024

    Author's Commentary #130:

    Time to talk about Chapter 130: The morning after.
    The title of the chapter is actually a clever pun on the word, "mourning" as Carol and Mimoko are mourning Iori, since they think she's dead. It can also be taken at face value since the chapter does take place the morning after the girls were attacked.

    As for the chapter, it mainly focuses on wrapping up Carol's backstory. The most notable part being her history with LinZay. All I'll say on LinZay is that she has already made an appearance in the story. Now lets give a bio on Carol's boyfriend, Christian.

    クリスチャン・バーンズ (Christian Barnes) is how his name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is February 7th. I chose this date at random, so there's no greater meaning behind why this date is his birthday.

    He never played chess, though if he did, his favorite piece would likely be the rook.

    Now we're approaching the big confrontation of the season. I originally intended to make this season much longer, but ended up rushing things. I actually had originally planned to just have the girls get warped straight to America instead of London, but I felt it was the better choice narratively as the Fairy league will play a major role in the series. In fact, things will be shifting back to them for a bit to see how they're feeling about Mimoko and co essentially bailing on their game.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 09, 2024

    Author's Commentary #125:

    Time to talk about Chapter 125: A heartless woman.
    This one's a long one, and was originally going to be three separate chapters, however, I hate Imelda so much that I decided to combine everything so that she's only in the story for a single chapter.

    イメルダ・ベリンシュ (Imelda Berrinche) is how her name is spelled in katakana. Her last name, Berrinche, actually means "tantrum" in Spanish.

    Her birthday is March 13th. I chose this date at random so there's no greater significance behind why this date is her birthday. Though I guess her birthday being on the 13th of a month was a bit intentional.

    Her favorite piece is the amazon, mainly because that's Pewler's favorite piece, and like him, the queen is her favorite normal chess piece.

    Like some of the other one-dimensional villains, such as Cypress, she was designed to be hated. She was the central source of Carol's misery and brainwashing at college and is a massive Pewler fangirl, believing everything he says to be gospel. The reason she smokes so much is mainly because it calms her down, however, after winning a DESPER match against a Desperado and making her prize immunity to nicotine, the cigarettes essentially lost their effect, allowing Imelda to smoke as much as she wants with no repercussions. Which makes it all the more weird that she suddenly died after the match.

    As for what happened to her sister, basically, her sister learned of what she had done to Carol and reprehended her for it. But Imelda aired her grievances to Pewler, which led to her sister being dragged into a DESPER match and turned into a sheepblossom as punishment for losing. As for what happened after, Imelda was walking with her sister, when she saw some guys walking by wearing anime shirts. Deeming anime degenerate, thanks to Pewler's dogma, she ordered her sister to kill the two. Her sister came close to killing one, but the other killed her in order to save his friend's life. This enraged Imelda who promptly phoned in Pewler for help, resulting in the two being tried for murder and eventually subjected to DESPER matches against Pewler and turned into sheepblossom for losing.

    The chapter's title also has some double meaning. On one hand, it could refer to Imelda, who claims to be a beacon of compassion, but is anything but. But it is primarily referring to Iori.

    As for the game, it ended up being a great way to write in a proper castling checkmate. Funnily enough, it occurred 10 games after the Iori and Carol collusion castling checkmate back in Chapter 110. Now Mimoko can see that Iori truly was capable of pulling off the move, and now holds no resentment over the bet. One final thing I'll mention is that this chapter introduces all the other American SPCMs. I'll go over them more in future commentaries.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 09, 2024

    Author's Commentary #123:

    Time to talk about Chapter 123: Carol's past.
    There's a lot to talk about, mainly the dystopian novel being referenced. Glasstone is actually an original novel that I created for this story. While it's possible I might turn it into a short novel, for now it will primarily exist just in this story. One thing I will elaborate more on are the sheepblossom.

    The sheepblossom are humanoid sheep with hoofed feet and human hands. They are able to photosynthesize, have longer lifespans than humans, and tend to spend their days peacefully grazing around acting like sheep. However, there is a dark secret. Once someone is turned into a sheepblossom, they lose their personality and free will. the antagonist and his chosen elites, the shepherds, may take control of them at anytime and force them to do whatever they please. Stampede through town, destroy property and wildlife, and even killing are all on the table. The sheepblossom themselves can even be cooked and eaten by the shepherds.

    As for why Tombstone Arizona was turned into a skyscraper metropolis, the antagonist in the book hated the Wild west theme of the town, and sought to erase it and replace it with a city of glass. Thanks to the DESPER, Pewler has now managed to do just that in the real world. Now, Tombstone is known as Glasstone, and is quickly on pace to become the largest city in Arizona, and possibly the US as a whole.

    Now onto Carol's past. This isn't the full story, but it is most of it. Due to her family being a political family, Carol's mother would constantly berate and physically reprimand her for not acting the way she wanted as she believed Carol's edgy personality would drag down the reputation of the family. Since she couldn't go all out on disciplining her at home due to fear of being charged with child abuse laws, she instead requested that the head of the politics club at the college, Imelda Berrinche, be responsible for "reforming" her daughter.

    Imelda obliged and was given the go-ahead to use as much physical violence necessary to get Carol in line. Even being granted permission to kill her should she prove to be "unsalvageable". It truly was a hellish experience for poor Carol, and it only got worse for her after her boyfriend was murdered. Now she's back in America and fears for her life. There is still one more notable piece of Carol's backstory, but that will be touched on in a future chapter.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Sep 08, 2024

    Author's Commentary #192:

    Time to talk about Chapter 192: Mizuse Kinjou.
    This marks the start of Side Story 3, however instead of taking place in the present, it takes place in the past and focuses on SPCM Himitsusama, aka Mizuse Niimi.

    Some of you might have noticed I've redesigned Mizuse a bit. That's because I'm considering rewriting her character a bit, and introducing her a bit earlier in the story. As such, she's fresh on the mind, so I decided it was time to flesh out her backstory.

    The first notable thing is that her original surname was Kinjou. 金正 is how it was spelled in kanji and means "gold" and "correct".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    She was the only child of a wealthy businessman, however, said man wanted a son to inherit the business, thus he was desperate to marry Mizuse off before he passed. He failed to do so however which led to all his assets and company being inherited by Mizuse. Mizuse didn't think highly of him though and is currently seeking to run his company to the ground as a middle finger to his legacy.

    The chess game was meant to symbolize how Mizuse is wasting what she has, which will ultimately come back to bite her. Just like she has money in the bank, she had pieces in the corner, but they did little to help her king after she sacrificed the other pieces which symbolize the company. As the story unfolds, you'll see how Mizuse goes from a morose heiress into one of the most successful women in the world, and I guarantee, it will make you hate Michiko even more. In fact, I think I might end up raising her a few spots on my next top 10 most hated characters list once this Side Story is over. I hope you look forward to reading this.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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