Nov 09, 2025
To:kazesenken
Hmm, I feel as though in a latter chapter more of what you're expecting of her comes through. As for the reviewing, I guess I could add some more insights into things. Part of the reason I'm being vague is both because I don't want to spoil everything in the BBB novel as some scenes from it will be used as parallels for the main couple, and the other is because I don't want to have to write out an entire second novel just for this one. That being said, I think I can at least have Chika gush a bit more at some of the scenes, so I'll do a quick edit.