Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #41:

    It's finally time to discuss the final chapter of Volume 1 before the epilogue, Chapter 41: The 7 secret chess maestros.
    The idea of there being secret super grandmasters was a by product of my "if this novel gets a video game adaptation, it needs to have this" mentality. However, as I thought about the idea more, I got inspiration for a new arc of the story and subsequent arcs as well.

    If you remember back in Chapter 30: Peter Morphy, the names of all of Japan's SPCMs (secret puzzle cafe managers) were mentioned. In addition to beating Himitsudono of the Ibaraki prefecture, Okisato's also beaten Himitsutan of Nagasaki, Himitsukun of Hokkaido, Himitsusama of Okinawa and Himitsuue, who currently doesn't have a designated secret puzzle cafe of her own yet, but is planned to get one in Tokyo. He's also encountered Himitsuchan of Nikko, but botched his match against her thanks to playing a stupid opening, thus, he'll have to rematch her. Himitsusan, however, is the only Japanese SPCM he hasn't encountered yet.

    As for the DSPCMs (deputy secret puzzle cafe managers), I originally introduced the concept of them back when I first did my major revisions to Season 4 in the original. They're essentially secret puzzle cafe managers in countries that don't have a maestro. Said countries can get anywhere from 1 to 6 DSPCMs, based off of a global chess power ranking system. For example, a place like Serbia would get 5 spots due to it's chess prowess while a place like Montenegro would only get 2. Nations can also get more DSPCMs than originally allotted, though the total number of DSPCMs can never exceed 6. City states such as Monaco and San Marino, can only ever have 1 DSPCM due to them being city states.

    One final thing to touch on with SPCMs and DSPCMs is the fact that they can compete in tournaments. Originally, I had it so that once someone became an SPCM they were effectively retired from competitive play, but I reversed this as I felt it didn't make sense in the long run.

    Now onto the maestros. They are this world's secret top chess players. Each one is located in a different country and each has 7 SPCMs serving under them. Japan's maestro is Maestro Himitsu. Speaking of maestros, Season 2 was once officially titled, The fallen maestro. If you read my initial post, you'll know that I originally decided to have a Season 2 Part 1 and Part 2. However, I decided to reverse that decision and have Season 2 just be Season 2, and Season 2 Part 2 be Season 3. Though Seasons 3 could be considered The Fallen Maestro arc.

    Just as I mentioned before though, Season 2 was thought up and written before I thought up the concept of the maestros. However, it does have some small build-up moments which will lead into Season 3. Not to mention Season 2 will also introduce some integral characters to Season 3.

    However, with the volume revisions, I'm falling back on my original vision and merging Seasons 2 and 3 into a single volume. I'll have a tad more to elaborate on in the commentary for the epilogue.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:41



    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #39:

    Time to talk about Chapter 39: A new era of chess.
    Originally, the whole point of this chapter was to highlight everyone's new ratings. While this is still largely the case with the revisions, I've now decided to introduce a character in this chapter that won't appear again until much later in the story, but will have an important role in it. I'm of course referring to Noa Ben-Horin, Maccabee's daughter.

    ノア・ベン・ホリン (Noa Ben-Horin) is how her name would be spelled in katakana. נועה בן-חורין (Noa Ben-Horin) is how her name would be spelled in Hebrew. Her first name would be spelled as 希愛 in kanji and means "hope" and "to love".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is July 1st, as it could be considered the half-way point in the year.

    Her favorite piece is the knight, mainly because it's her father's favorite piece.

    Her mother was Japanese so she is half-Japanese. She was born in America though and lived there with her family until about 2 months prior to the start of the series. While she's only making a brief cameo here, I promise that when she returns, she will not only have a big role in the series, but also just might be someone that can go toe-to-toe with Mimoko on the chessboard.

    Now with that out of the way, I'll briefly list all the ratings changes before we discuss them. Okisato: 2434 to 2525, Yuusuke: 1478 to 1530, Iori: 400 to 1144, Utami: unrated to 1001, Maida: unrated to 1354, Numakawa: unrated to 900, Rodeo: unrated to 250, Yuzuha: unrated to 350, and finally Mimoko: unrated to 2700. Nyoan's rating also increased from 900 to 999.

    First let's talk about Iori's new rating as there's some significance behind it. As some of you might know, 4 is an unlucky number in Japan due to it's association with death. And since Iori is an ex-murderer, her having an affinity for the number 4 makes sense. This is also why I deliberately chose to have her have 4 million subscribers.

    Now onto Mimoko. Her breaking 2700 is both a testament to her skill and a nod to Judit Polgár, the first female chess player to achieve a rating over 2700. With her high rating, Mimoko is now rated higher than most of the Desperado league's members. Not to mention, even the ones rated higher than her would likely be unable to soundly beat her. Much like Gyro feared, Mimoko is now the new shining star of the chess world.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:39

    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #38:

    Time to talk about Chapter 38: Millisecond chess.
    Even though the climax is over, there's still a bit left before Volume 1 ends. Most notably the fact that Mimoko herself still has to play her final round game.

    Originally, Mimoko was actually going to have her match against Hagemi as the grand finale without even playing Peter, however, I wanted her to play and draw against Peter to set up their chemistry for later arcs of the story. As such, I had the Hagemi game take place in round 4 and had the game against Peter end in a draw by repetition.

    Intriguingly enough, a threefold repetition does not automatically end a game in real life. Rather, a player must call an arbiter over to prove the claim. There is also a fivefold repetition rule which unlike the threefold one, mandates that an arbiter declare the game a draw and void any subsequent moves. Since the DESPER acts as an arbiter, threefold repetitions always result in a draw when they occur. Funnily enough, Chess.com also automatically ends the game in a draw if the threefold repetition rule is triggered.

    Like the Yuusuke-Zanni stalemate game starting in Chapter 8: Blitzkrieg and ending in Chapter 10: Knight race, I doubt there will be many draw by repetition games in the series going forward. Though the chances of another one appearing are higher than another stalemate game appearing. As for Mimoko and Peter, I can guarantee they will have a proper rematch and it will be amazing.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #37:

    Time to talk about Chapter 37: Desperado.
    We've finally reached the climax of Volume 1. First off, some background on the match. Originally, the match I used for this chapter was a match I won against the 1800-rated Chess.com bot, Wally, on my own. However, I felt the match itself was incredibly lackluster and decided to rewrite the game. This time, I challenged a 2500-rated Chess.com bot and played with all the tools available in order to bring you the game that is now featured in this chapter.

    A big reason the revision came about was because I ended up writing games with crazier moves in Seasons 2 and 3, and when looking back on the original game for this chapter, I felt the game needed to be changed as it didn't feel like an Okisato game.

    This worked out really well as the revised game not only features a Barnes Opening: Hammerschlag Variation, but also an en passant that ends up sealing Gyro's fate. I couldn't ask for a more fitting game for the climax of Season 1 and Volume 1. In fact, I enjoy this new game so much, that it's one of my top 10 favorite games in the series.

    I will also confirm that Gyro is dead and won't be coming back. Though he'll likely reappear in flashbacks. As for his portrait in the Desperado collage art, the purple "fire" is actually purple lightning, which references how he dies by electrocution. Originally, it was just purple fire, but I changed it to lightning.

    One final thing I'll mention is that each major arc villain from here on out will largely embody one of the 7 deadly sins. Gyro, the main antagonist of Season 1/Volume 1, embodied the sin of Tristitia (Sorrow/despair/despondency/melancholy). The reason for that is due to him constantly being in a state of despair after meeting Mimoko.

    Funnily enough, the DESPERs themselves are a pun on the word "despair" which is fitting since they can cause despair, and because Gyro, one of the minds behind them, embodies the sin of despair. Have fun guessing the sins of future arc villains. I'll make sure to reveal the sins they embody as soon as their arc is over.

    One final thing I'll mention is that "desperado" is also the term used to describe a piece determined to give itself up in order to bring about a stalemate. This is why it's fitting that many of the Desperado league members hope to bring about a draw when they see they are losing. I will also confirm that Gyro was one of the founders of the league and is second in command behind the Ultima-master despite there being other members more skilled than him.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #39:

    Time to discuss Chapter 39: A new era of chess.
    Originally, the whole point of this chapter was to highlight everyone's new ratings. While this is still largely the case with the revisions, I've now decided to introduce a character in this chapter that won't appear again until much later in the story, but will have an important role in it. I'm of course referring to Noa Ben-Horin, Maccabee's daughter.

    ノア・ベン・ホリン (Noa Ben-Horin) is how her name would be spelled in katakana. נועה בן-חורין (Noa Ben-Horin) is how her name would be spelled in Hebrew. Her first name would be spelled as 希愛 in kanji and means "hope" and "to love".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is July 1st, as it could be considered the half-way point in the year.

    Her favorite piece is the knight, mainly because it's her father's favorite piece.

    Her mother was Japanese so she is half-Japanese. She was born in America though and lived there with her family until about 2 months prior to the start of the series. While she's only making a brief cameo here, I promise that when she returns, she will not only have a big role in the series, but also just might be someone that can go toe-to-toe with Mimoko on the chessboard.

    Now with that out of the way, I'll briefly list all the ratings changes before we discuss them. Okisato: 2434 to 2525, Yuusuke: 1478 to 1530, Iori: 400 to 1144, Utami: unrated to 1001, Maida: unrated to 1354, Numakawa: unrated to 900, Rodeo: unrated to 250, Yuzuha: unrated to 350, and finally Mimoko: unrated to 2700. Nyoan's rating also increased from 900 to 999.

    First let's talk about Iori's new rating as there's some significance behind it. As some of you might know, 4 is an unlucky number in Japan due to it's association with death. And since Iori is an ex-murderer, her having an affinity for the number 4 makes sense. This is also why I deliberately chose to have her have 4 million subscribers.

    Now onto Mimoko. Her breaking 2700 is both a testament to her skill and a nod to Judit Polgár, the first female chess player to achieve a rating over 2700. With her high rating, Mimoko is now rated higher than most of the Desperado league's members. Not to mention, even the ones rated higher than her would likely be unable to soundly beat her. Much like Gyro feared, Mimoko is now the new shining star of the chess world.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #36:

    Time to talk about Chapter 36: Showdown on the lagoon.
    Since it's the final round, DESPERs are allowed and Gyro and Zanni are wasting no time in unleashing them. Zanni's motive for why he enjoys collecting skeleton arms has finally been explained, and in short, he's batshit insane. His mass murder of his town is what led to his medical license being revoked and him becoming a cannibal. He adorns his room with all the skeleton arms he's collected and dubs it his "peace conference". He also tends to carry some around with him both for comfort and intimidation.

    One quick thing to note is that originally, this chapter was split into two separate chapters, with the latter of the two being titled, Learning from history. Thanks to the new chapters being added and me not wanting to mess up the overall chapter order of the original series too much, I decided to merge the chapters as I felt they also worked better together.

    Now onto a different topic. If you saw the collage art of the Desperado members, you'll notice that there is some foreshadowing within it. For example, Zanni's portrait is actually from this chapter and depicts the hell lagoon he summons with his DESPER. Cypress' on the other hand references the blitz timer and the blowtorch from Chapter 8: Blitzkrieg, Chapter 9: Psychopath, and Chapter 10: Knight race, Nyoan's references her first appearance in Chapter 16: Stalker, Inojin's references the fact that he's attacking during a sunset in Chapter 1: An Underground Chess Match, and Peter standing on his own references the fact that while he is a Desperado, he does his own thing. There's other references hidden there for the other characters, as well as some teasers of future members. See if you can guess all the references before they're revealed in future commentaries.

    Originally, the game for this chapter was going to be a complete replay of the first game between Yuusuke and Zanni, with Yuusuke winning with the rook h6 checkmate that he missed back then. However, that option was not viable as getting the game to that position would have required forcing Zanni to make unnecessary or intentional blunders, which I didn't want. As for how Yuusuke managed to beat Zanni, it's all thanks to some training he received from Mimoko the night prior. After getting yelled at by his mother for all the blunders he made in his first game against Zanni, Yuusuke approached Mimoko and asked her for help on how to beat Zanni in the future. The two then went over the game with Mimoko pointing out how Yuusuke could have beaten Zanni. Yuusuke then took all that knowledge and applied it here.

    Now, Zanni will never hurt anyone ever again, aside from himself. As for more on his fate, Redfield plans to drop him off on a mountainous deserted region located on the island that house WWCF HQ, and observe how long it takes for him to die. While Yuusuke didn't intend for Zanni to have such a cruel fate, he ended up unintentionally giving one to him anyway, hearkening back to what Okisato told him about the DESPER back in Chapter 11: DESPER. With Zanni out of the picture, the only threat left now is Gyro himself.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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