Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #25:

    Time to talk about Chapter 25: Mimoko's debut match.
    Tis chapter is the first of the new chapters to be added into Season 1. Originally, Rounds 1 and 2 of the Knigtlife classic were skipped over, but I felt the matches needed to be showcased to better highlight Mimoko's and Okisato's prowess before their respective marquee matches of the season. What also brought this change about was the fact that thanks to Season 7, the series now has well over 500 characters from which I can draw from to have debut earlier in the story. As such, let's discuss those two characters now.

    ヒューバート・ノイマン (Hubert Neuman) is how Hubert's name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is June 20th, which he shares with American grandmaster, Hans Nieman.

    His favorite piece is the pawn.

    ゴラナ・ペトロヴィッチ (Gorana Petrović) is how Gorana's name would be spelled in katakana. Горана Петровић (Gorana Petrović) is how it would be spelled in Serbian (Cyrillic).

    Her birthday is May 26th, which she shares with Serbian international master, Teodora Injac.

    Her favorite piece is the rook, since it's built like a mountain.

    Gorana is currently the highest rated female chess player in Serbia. She enjoys the outdoors and hiking in the mountains and also has a strong moral compass, and will refuse to remain silent on things she deems to be wrong and/or an injustice.

    As for the game, it features the infamous London System, a strong opening used at all levels that is either loved or hated. It originally debuted in Season 4, but with the chance to add new games to Season 1, I decided that Mimoko's would include the London, since it actually is one of her most preferred openings as White. Getting back to the game itself, I was really pleased with how it turned out as it was exciting from start to finish, and filled, what I believed, to be the missing piece of excitement, Season 1 was lacking.

    There are three more new games that will debut in this season thanks to the revisions. For this next game, all I'll say is that it will feature my favorite opening of all time. I hope you're looking forward to said opening's new and earlier debut in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #24:

    Time to discuss Chapter 24: Lagoon pathways hotel.
    First up, the hotel itself. It actually draws inspiration from a hotel I once went to that featured an intricate waterfall and waterways running throughout the main room. Of course, the waterways weren't big enough to ride boats in them and were more for looking at. Thus, I decided to make Lagoon pathways far more ambient to that of a nighttime lagoon, and also have it so that the canals could be ridden in by boat.

    Now onto the new chess club members, Rodeo Gorou and Yuzuha Zenihara. Both of these characters aren't going to have much of an impact on this arc. The only reason I introduced them here was so that they could get ratings upon completing the tournament.

    As stated in the chapter, Rodeo likes rooks while Yuzuha likes knights. Rodeo likes rooks due to his belief that they're strong and tough like him. Yuzuha likes knights simply because they are horses and horses are her favorite animal.

    伍楼 路出男 (Gorou Rodeo) is how Rodeo's name is spelled in kanji. 路出男 can translate to "large", "exit", and "man". His last name, 伍楼 translates to "five" and "tower", which is fitting considering Rodeo's a large young man and has an affinity for rooks. Though ironically, rooks are actually one of the shortest pieces on the board.

    銭原 友珠羽 (Zenihara Yuzuha) is how Yuzuha's name is spelled in kanji. 友珠羽 can translate to "friend", "pearl", and "wing". 銭原 translates to "money" and "origin".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Rodeo's birthday is February 23rd. The reason for that is that it's the day Rodeo day was this year. Rodeo day is always the last Friday in February.

    Yuzuha's birthday is September 9th. The reason for this is because September 9th is apparently the most common birthday in the world.

    One other thing I'll mention is that this chapter has been revised numerous times, mainly to include antagonists that will become more relevant later. As such, I'll be holding off on giving their bios until they become more relevant in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #23:

    Time to discuss Chapter 23: Hagemi's first match.
    Originally, this wasn't going to exist, but I felt that I needed to flesh out more of why Gyro feared Hagemi so I decided to write this chapter. It ended up working in the end, though I'll elaborate more on that in a future commentary. One thing I will state now is up until the revised game log was released, the official date this match took place on was unknown, but now, the official date this game took place on was June 23rd, 2005. Now let's discuss some more info on Hagemi.

    Hagemi comes from a rich family, but ran away from home after her father tried to force her into a relationship with the son of an influential politician. She was only 16 at the time, and had never played chess prior. After meeting and impressing Redfield, she quickly became an overnight star in the chess world, but in the process, upstaged Kuon. At the time, Kuon was a 9-year old chess prodigy whom was going to be the next big star, until Hagemi came out of nowhere and not only upstaged her, but became Redfield's favorite chess player. As such, Kuon developed a rivalry with Hagemi and views her with hostility. Hagemi however, initially viewed her as a little sister, but began seeing her in a bit more of a romantic light once she became an adult. Hagemi's also close with Mimoko's mother as well as various other mothers in the neighborhood. She's actually very sociable and nice, though can become terrifying when she's angry.

    One final topic I'll touch on are Inojin and Cypress. First off, both ended up having sex with Gyro as a punishment for Gyro's loss. The incident ended up causing Cypress to have mild, but not romantic affection for Gyro. The incident is also one of the big reasons he made it his creed not to underestimate women.

    Finally, let's briefly give Inojin his bio since this will likely be the last time we see him in the story.
    In kanji, his name is 伊之助 猪仁 (Inosuke Inojin). 猪仁 can mean "boar" and "humanity", while 伊之助 is actually the same as Inosuke Hashibira's name from Kimetsu no yaiba and translates to "Italy", "to reach" , and "a nickname". There really isn't much significance behind his name. I just liked how it sounded.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is April 21st and his favorite piece is the knight. The reason for that is because he views himself as a good-looking guy on a horse. Unlike a knight though, he's not chivalrous in the slightest.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #22:

    Time to discuss Chapter 22: A prodigy in the making.
    This chapter gives us the first proper look at Okisato and Mimoko going all out. It also illustrates that just like in the real world, blunders are more prone to occur the faster the playing speed is.

    Now let's discuss the chess club. They've expanded their roster from 5 members to 10. However, only 8 of them will really be getting the spotlight in the story.

    As for the other two, their names are Zago-kun (座吾) and Azanira-chan (畔蒜 ).
    座吾 translates to "seat" and "myself" while 畔蒜 translates to "shore" and "perennial plant of the lily family".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for why they only have surnames, both were made with the intention that if this novel ever got a video game adaptation, they'd be the player characters. As a result, their first names would be chosen by the player.

    Azenira and Zago won't have a major role in the novel, but they will both have some cameos. And as for how things would work out plot-wise if the novel ever did get a video game adaptation, they'd essentially follow Okisato around and replace Numakawa in arcs that he's present in since Numakawa contributes the least to the story.

    Though going more into a potential video game adaptation, you would still be able to play as characters like Okisato for story battles. Speaking of which, I'd also make sure all the story matches (Okisato vs Inoji, Iori vs Cypress, Yuusuke vs Zanni, the bughouse game, etc.) have secret cut-scenes and dialogue if you play the games EXACTLY like they are in the story. This would only be a feature of story mode though.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #21:

    This time, we're discussing Chapter 21: WWCF cards.
    The primary purpose of this chapter was to talk about the WWCF cards. Since this was written before I rewrote some of the earlier chapters, this was originally going to be the giant info dump chapter on the WWCF cards. However, all this chapter really ended up doing was revealing that they can allow their holders to earn money from winning battles. Part of my mentality for doing that is that if this novel were to ever get a video game adaptation, the banking feature would essentially function similar to how you get money from winning battles in Pokemon games.

    I also thought it would be better to gradually reveal some of the features of the WWCF cards rather than dump everything all at once, so look forward to more reveals about the card's features in future chapters.

    Finally, let's discuss Syouma Numakawa. 沼川 將誠 (Numakawa Syouma) is how his name is written in kanji. 將誠 means "to almost be" and "fact", which is fitting since he's part of the science club.
    沼川 on the other hand, translates to "swamp river".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is June 13th, which he shares with Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem three houses.

    Like Maida, he feels the queen is the most versatile piece on the board.

    He's actually skilled at programming, but also very arrogant. Funnily enough, the greatest influence for his character is actually Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire emblem three houses.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #20:

    It's time to discuss Chapter 20: Chess experiment.
    This chapter essentially served as a way to help spread word of the chess club throughout the school, and establish Maida as the supervising teacher for it. As such, I decided that it would be fitting for her to have her class do an experiment related to chess. The experiment is essentially seeing what the most common moves are amongst the class. Though when class reconvenes, the students will play each other from the e4 Nf6 position so look forward to that.

    Finally, the big secret regarding Hagemi is out; she's the top female chess player in the world, publicly at least. I'll talk more about her background later, so for now, we'll just go over some basic trivia about her.

    Her name is written as 承先 励美 (Shousen Hagemi) in kanji, with her first name, 励美, translates to "Inspire" and "beautiful". Now remember how I said way back in Author's Commentary #3 that 承先 can mean "first"? That's why I chose it to be Yuusuke and Hagemi's surname as Hagemi is currently the number 1 female chess player in the world.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 31st which she shares with Koneru Humpy, an Indian grandmaster and one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook. Initially, she thought rooks were lousy, but quickly found how valuable they are in the endgame, which led to them becoming her favorite piece.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #19:

    It's time to discuss Chapter 19: Feline fanatic.
    First thing's first, Kuon was originally supposed to be a much larger antagonist, but I couldn't think of what to do with her, so I relegated her to that of a minor one. As such, this chapter originally served to build her up as a messed up villain, but since I decided to change course, I ended up rewriting Kuon to make her more of a scientist.

    南谷 九怨 (Nanya Kuon) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 九怨, translates to "nine" and "resentment", which is fitting for her character. Her last name, 南谷, means "South" and "ravine". It also has "nya" in it which is why I chose it.

    Her birthday is August 8th, which is International cat day. As for why she prefers catgirls over cats, that will eventually be explained in the story.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly because she herself believes she is the queen of chess. She was actually a child prodigy, but ended up getting upstaged when her eventual rival and world's highest rated female player entered the scene. As for who that woman is, that will be revealed soon.

    I'll also talk a bit about Nyogaku Nakano. Like Kuon, I originally planned for her to have a larger role, but for now she'll be a minor character.

    中埜 如岳 (Nakano Nyogaku) is how her name is written in kanji. Her first name,
    如岳 means "similar to" and "peak". Her last name, 中埜 means "inside" and "field". It is an obvious nod to the the Nakano quintuplets from the Quintessential quintuplets. Though funnily enough, the character that largely inspired Nyogaku was actually Sahara Wakasa from Mato seihei no slave.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is December 4th. I originally wanted to make her birthday the same as Sahara's but decided to go with something a bit more creative as Sahara debuted in the 12th chapter of the manga and the 4th episode of the anime.

    As for her favorite piece, it's the bishop. Why? Because she likes how they go whoosh on the diagonals.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #18:

    Time to discuss Chapter 18: A woman of science.
    First off, let's briefly touch on the now bald catgirl, Nyoan. One thing I've always wondered about catgirls is if they have two sets of ears. That's why I decided to answer that question and found out... They do indeed have both human and cat ears, or at least Nyoan does. Even though she was subjected to a full-head wax, her hair has a small chance of growing back naturally. However, since Okisato simply made her punishment "losing all her hair and fur", she could challenge someone to a DESPER battle and have her prize for winning be her hair and fur growing back. Of course, Nyoan is probably not smart enough to think of that herself.

    Now let's move on to Okisato's 27-year old teacher, Mayana Maida. She's a woman of science and is highly intelligent. She draws heavy inspiration from Sae Chabashira from Classroom of the elite.

    毎田 万夜奈 (Maida Mayana) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万夜奈, can translate to "ten thousand", "night", and "fruit tree". Her last name, 毎田, means "always" and "rice field".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 14th which is shared with Albert Einstein, one of the most famous scientists of all time. Believe it or not, Einstein did play chess from time to time so this can technically count as a chess related birthday as well.

    Even though she's just now picking up chess, she's determined that the queen is by far one of the more useful pieces on the board, and thus that could be considered her favorite piece, which is a bit ironic considering she was trapped in one, but it could also be argued that the incident gave her an up close look at how useful the queen is.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #17:

    Time to discuss Chapter 17: Pawn and two moves odds.
    First off, let's discuss odds chess. Odds are a form of handicaps players might implement to make games more interesting and/or give weaker players a better chance of beating them. The odds used for this chapter, pawn and two moves, means white gets to start by making two moves in a row and black is down their f-pawn. As for why it's always the f-pawn, removing any other pawn can actually give the player an advantage by opening up a file for a rook if it's the a- pawn or h-pawn, the diagonals for the bishop if it's the b-pawn or g-pawn, the diagonals for the queen if its the c-pawn or e-pawn (though Two pawns odds removes the c-pawn in addition to the f-pawn), and removing the d-pawn opens the file for the queen and a diagonal for a bishop. Removing the f-pawn offers no such advantage and instead leaves the king vulnerable to an attack diagonally, which is exactly what happened in this game.
    or the queen and/or a diagonal for a bishop and queen.

    As for the DESPER, it factors in how disadvantaged the player with the odds is, and lessens the severity of the punishment accordingly. Had Nyoan implemented queen and move odds, Okisato wouldn't have died if he lost. However, the punishment for the player that isn't handicapped are never lessened regardless of the odds implemented.

    Odds can only be triggered if the one activating the DESPER, or the person the DESPER holder activated their DESPER for, is rated 1000 points lower than their opponent. This means that DESPER holders that are higher-rated than their opponent can't implement odds both for their opponent, or themself. Naturally, the higher-rated opponent can simply refuse to participate which would deactivate the DESPER for the day.

    Now onto the game itself. This was very fun to write mainly due to the fact that Okisato also had to avoid losing his queen to prevent Maida from dying. The concept of trapping people in pieces is a relatively new discovery for the Desperado league, with only Nyoan and a few others being aware of it. However, in order to force someone to be trapped in a piece, the victim must be rated 500 points lower than the one who activates the DESPER, and can only be placed within a piece if they are restrained beforehand and if the the Desperado playing is rated the same as or lower than their opponent.

    Getting back to the game, Nyoan was completely outwitted by Okisato. She did try to attack Maida a couple of times, but since Maida was in a queen, Okisato could defend her much easier than if she was in a pawn.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #16:

    This time, we're discussing Chapter 16: Stalker.
    And what better topic to discuss than the stalker herself, Nyoan Nyakuoji, nya. First off, she ends her sentences with "nya". Second, she gained her cat ears and cat tail, which are both real, thanks to the DESPER.

    若王子 如杏 (Nyakuoji Nyoan) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 如杏, can mean "similar to" and "apricot" as well as "inferior". Her last name,
    若王子, can translate to "immature", "monarch", and "junior". I mainly chose Nyakuoji as her last name due to it having "nya" in it. The school Nyoan mentioned she was from, Mimineko gakuin, is also a pun on the word, nekomimi which means cat ears.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is February 22nd. The reason for that is that it's Japan's cat day and can be read as an abbreviation for "nyan nyan nyan".

    Her favorite piece is the knight since like a cat, since it's movement is the closest to resembling that of a cat's. She's also one of the few characters to have some meaning behind her rating. Originally, it was 800, but I increased it to 900 to make reference to the fact that cat's are said to have "9 lives". The buff also makes her slightly more intimidating, but unlike Gyro, the buff was more so to make the cat reference rather than make her more intimidating.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Apr 09, 2025

    Author's Commentary #14:

    It's time to discuss Chapter 14: Bughouse brawl.
    Now is the time to talk about both the principal and Nagi, whom were both introduced in chapter 1. First off, both are actually named Nagi Enoki, however, the kanji for their names is different. The principal's name is 渚, which translates to "anxiety", while Nagi's name, 梛, means "evergreen tall tree". Their names were chosen in reference to Nagi Umino from A couple of cuckoos.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Nagi's birthday is April 6th, which is shared with Nagi Umino of A couple of cuckoos. The principal's is November 13th, which is shared with Mami Namai from Rent a girlfriend.

    As for Nagi, he's the president of the shogi club as well as a 5-dan in shogi. Nagi is actually a twin and has an older brother named Kazuya. Originally, their names were flipped, but changed after Nagi was shown to be more skilled at shogi than Kazuya. The principal also gave Kazuya a scar to better distinguish the two, and treated him much like he did Utami until his political talents came to bloom.

    The principal, believe it or not is a 1-dan in shogi despite his poor chess skills. He is also very wealthy, but seeks to gain more wealth and power.

    The bughouse game against the shogi club was actually one of the first major events I had planned for the story. It was originally goin to take place before the Cypress and Zanni confrontation, but I felt jumping in the bughouse before the confrontation wouldn't flow as well, so I pushed it back, which ended up working out real well. Another reason I wanted to do a bughouse game was because I wanted to have the punishment for the losers be getting zapped with a giant bug zapper. For some reason, I always think of a giant bug zapper whenever I hear the term "bughouse", thus I felt it was fitting to have the room turn into a giant bug zapper and for the losers to be electrocuted to death.

    Now let's discuss what bughouse is. Bughouse a two player variation of chess that allows you to use pieces captured by your teammate. You are allowed to drop a piece that can check or mate, and unlike in shogi you can drop a pawn on the same file that contains a pawn of the same color, and drop a pawn to checkmate. You can't however, drop a pawn on the 1st or 8th ranks. Conversing with your teammate is also permitted, making this more of a strategy game.

    The game itself was by far one of the harder ones I had to write as I essentially had to create everything from scratch and get the piece drops right. However, the effort was worth it. This is by far one of my favorite games in the series.

    "Despite that, I doubt I'll ever do a bughouse game again, but I might consider doing a Crazyhouse game, which is a single player variant of Bughouse, in the future." were my words when I originally wrote this commentary out back in April of last year, but now I can confirm that there not only are more bughouse games in the series, but more are planned. They just won't show up again until well into Season 7 of the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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