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A little person with a passion for writing and reading who wants to grow as best she can and help others to grow in the same way she was helped to grow :)
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Jul 30, 2023
Noooo! 😭 I hope you accomplish what you are looking for during your break. ❤️
Jul 29, 2023
HAHAHA! Going to the mall with his friend's girlfriend... yes he should be punished in the bikini section 😂 Great work Arman!
W-what?! She wasn't kidnapped!!! 🥳🥳 She's hiding from someone... then why wouldn't she respond to his messages??? 🥺 He finally gets to see her again!! ❤️❤️❤️ Who is she running from?? The police? A secret organization... that possibly made her? 😳 Will they take her away from him?? 🥺😭😠 Is her going to drop everything to help her escape from whoever's searching for her?
Awesome writing! Keep it up! ❤️
NO! AAHHHHH!! 😱 The suspenseful cliffhanger... LITERALLY! He'll probably never be able to play soccer again. Will they both survive or will they be torn apart?? 😭
Keep up the amazing writing Shulox ❤️❤️
Jul 27, 2023
Yay!
Jul 26, 2023
Hopefully Jun doesn't steal Aoi from Iharu 😂 Is Saika coming back?? YES!! Gym bros!!! 🏋️ Can't wait for more!!
Jul 22, 2023
To:Shulox
Thank you so much for the feedback! 😊
I did the first person thing on purpose just to try it out. Do you think I should change it so the entire story is in third person or is going back and forth fine? Also should I break the sentences so that they are shorter using periods or just add commas?
Jul 21, 2023
Woah, I was not expecting that! Did she get trapped by a falling tree? 😂
Jul 19, 2023
Yes! He got the best girl! I can't wait for volume 2!
YES! YAY! SHE'S ALIVE!
Jul 18, 2023
No! She can't be dead! 😭😭 Saika deserves a death sentence for this!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! Will Saika come back and kill the rest of them? 😲
Jul 15, 2023
Okay thank you! Let me know if there's anything else I should change!
Thank you so much for your feedback! ❤️
Did I use those expressions multiple times?
