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Writer, programmer, and dad! Things I love: fantasy genre, soccer, martial arts, anime, MTG, and of course writing!
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Nov 21, 2023
To:minatika
Great feedback! Thanks! I think I see what you mean. It's almost like the reader is kept at a distance rather than experiencing the scene with the character. I'll have to work on that. Thanks again! 😁
Oct 28, 2023
Aidachi, Nanako, and Kenta really are great! They were such fun characters to write! I wish I could've included more of them but ran out of time! This is the best I could do in a month and a half.
Thanks! I feel like my descriptions aren't the best so glad you liked them! And OMG your comment on the last chapter! I thought for sure no one would think of the twist for Takao to copy the curse onto Karou to trick her into removing it so he could copy the removal and use it on Sumire! 🤯🤣
It's a funny coincidence we both have a Mia character. I think the name fits your Mia perfectly! it's such a sweet cutesy name. Which is why I picked it for my villain! For irony! Her name sounds sweet but she's very much not! 🤣
Oct 27, 2023
thank you for all the wonderful comments! they are always a joy to read! but yes lol no need to spend too much time on comments! I hope you enjoy the rest! Thanks for reading this far!
Oct 17, 2023
To:kazesenken
Good to hear! Unexpected is what I like to go for! That and using magic in creative unexpected ways.
Oct 01, 2023
😆 If only he were the type to drink on the job, he would've been set with a dragon maid! 🤣
It's Loki!! World Breakers and defying fate was reminding me of something this whole time and I couldn't figure it out! But I finally got it!! It's the Disney series Loki!
Sep 30, 2023
Awe that was fabulous! 😍 So good! So glad I made it to the end! Sweet and satisfying! (I'm betting on this novel to win the contest! Good luck! 😉🤞)
Sep 26, 2023
Oh yes! He definitely used magic there! It's okay if it wasn't super clear what magic he used, since Takao's magic is still a mystery!
Sep 25, 2023
That's definitely the vibe I was going for with Nanako! 😁 She's strong, cheerful, and a good role model! 😅 Yes, everything in the dungeon will go perfectly according to plan! There is no ominous foreshadowing here! 😅
Yeah, poor Takao! The other adventurers don't take him seriously yet 😥 but it's only his first job! More jobs completed = more respect earned! And more experience, which he needs before his advancement test! Aidachi is definitely a great guild master! He saw their potential and offered them an opportunity to raise their rank, but he's got to make sure they're really serious and ready, which brings us to the next chapter!
Sep 22, 2023
To:t_tomodachi22
Nah I don't think it's weird! As long it's consistent it's perfectly fine! I actually like how the Mr and Ms adds an air of distance (customer service mode!) between Naoki and the others. It reinforces the idea that he's not friends with them, he's just being adult polite. Which is a little more difficult to achieve with -san.
Sep 21, 2023
Those cat ears aren't just for show eh? 😆
Toren is cute! He might be my favorite character!Maybe it's the cat ears 🐈 Oh no! Not the fruit! It wasn't one of the main characters was it?! Mia's father? Madam Claire? Roki? Well probably not Roki
