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Writer, programmer, dad, old guy Things I love: fantasy genre, soccer, martial arts, anime, MTG, and of course writing
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Mar 26, 2025
To:Homura lv6
I don't know about masterpiece ☺️ but thanks! I am pretty happy with how it turned out
Jan 22, 2025
And thank you for reading! And for all the comments along the way! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm glad everything worked out for Liane as well. When I first outlined this story, she died in the end 😨😭 But I changed it at the last minute and I like this version better, so I'm glad others like it too. After the contest ends, I may add a few more bonus chapters, but we'll see. Thanks again for reading!
Jan 20, 2025
To:t_tomodachi22
Don't forget, the System's job it make humans happy 😄 It will give you just about anything you ask for except for letting you see another real human. If you went somewhere where another real human happened to be by happenstance, it has ways of dealing with that hehehe 😈
Oh getting a farm is easy. Just ask the System for one and it will demolish all your neighbors houses to build you one 👍🥳
yeah Liane's plan isn't the best lol In Liam (pre Liane) and Claire's case, they lived together because Liam raised Claire, so they are somewhat of an exception to the rule and were allowed to be in contact because they had that existing relationship. Most people are raised by AI so they don't have that relationship and so for them, there wouldn't be a way to meet another real person without using a loophole like Liane is using. (do I explain this in the novel? 🤔 can't quite remember 😑)
Jan 19, 2025
oh very much especially when you consider she is now the same age as her daughter 😖🫣
HH really is such a funny drone. It just wants to be a helpful lad! Oh great guess! but will it be so easy? we'll see (oh how i want to spoil things! but must hold back! 🤐)
Hi Tomodachi! lovely to see you! I'm glad the shells are coming off as creepy. that was my intention
To:Bubbles
Oh yes I happen to have very high suspension of disbelief so much so that I have to watch myself or I'll write things that are so crazy no one would believe it in a million years... which this story certainly isn't that...
Jan 16, 2025
To:lolitroy
yup you got that right. And the reason behind the oddness with the age is... well I won't spoil it 😁
Jan 10, 2025
Nice! You touched on one of the big questions the story tries to ask: Can AI replace human connections? And can it do it without causing any adverse side effects to humans? Maybe. Maybe not Personally I think it's a really nice world either way. It's peaceful, the AI takes care of the mundane tasks, people can pursue their passions without worrying about money (money isn't a thing anymore by this time). I'd live there
Jan 06, 2025
Yeah that seems like it might not go over well 😬 but where there's a will there's a way (unless the author says otherwise 😶)
Her troubles aren't over yet unfortunately. As the author it is in fact my job to make her unhappy for as long as possible 😓
Jan 02, 2025
Your comment actually gave me a great idea of where I could add the explanation for the System in this chapter, so thank you very much!
Your reading compression is excellent good reader! I simply haven't explained everything regarding the system yet. It's not exactly a secret, it's just that the information is common knowledge in this world, and so it's a bit tricky to explain to the reader while making it seem natural. But the information is coming!
