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Writer, programmer, dad, old guy Things I love: fantasy genre, soccer, martial arts, anime, MTG, and of course writing
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Sep 15, 2023
To:t_tomodachi22
Takao's really come a long way at this point! First he couldn't even pass the adventurer test, now he's counted one of the strongest in town!! 😭😁
Right! It was pretty epic in my head! Glad to hear it came off that way! 🐉🌪💥💧🔥🐍🦅
thanks! 😍 I try! some are a bit forced since I had to split a chapter when it was too long!
That's another detail I couldn't fit because of word count! 😢 Since Takao was using his magic the whole time to copy Sumire, he already had the experience to use it well once he finally knew what it was! 🤣 buggy the clowns devil fruit! lol yeah that would've been nice!
Woo! Takao has magic! It was a fun magic to work with because it could a lot of different things! Very tricky to guess! 🤣 Yeah I wrote Mia to be pretty unlikable!
hehehe we'll see soon who wants to capture her!
I'm not sure if it came through clearly in the writing (word count forced me to limit some details), but this part of town was where Sumire lived 100 years ago! 🤯 So she actually wandered there because it was familiar, not knowing it was deserted! Yup nice call 😁 You guessed right Nanako sensed something was up!
lol just a bit dense 😁 but they did just go through a lot! and oh I REALLY would've loved to Sumire's thoughts and feelings at this point because it explains a lot! but I couldn't figure out how to slip it in since it's from Takao's perspective!
🤣 The chapter title lol Loved those visual descriptions of Roki riding the kelpie! Bubbles foaming from his mouth! 😂
To:minatika
Southern Belle wasn't exactly what I envisioned for her accent 🤔 but I can easily imagine that 😂 and it's super cute 🥰
🤣 Love the imagined exchange between Takao and his boss! Unfortunately for Takao it probably didn't go that well! And he has day shift since he can't give himself dark vision so he was asking for the day off right then 😬
Two entries back to back! Way to go Hiroyuki! I like this book where entries appear. It's like a gold star for Hiroyuki 🤩 and it lets us see his progress compared to his last relationship! But how did she know about his father?🤔
😍 Thanks for the comment! Yeah Sumire be freeloading but at least she didn't take the bed! 😁
Sep 13, 2023
Oh! that would've been interesting if Yumiko had been in on the ambush!
Sep 12, 2023
Aw! Such a sweet end! Together forever, and they get to see Lisa and Don! AND Caisey gonna sneak out of his deal with the fates! Lucky Caisey that he's got such a great goddess as Rina!
