Apr 18, 2020
Took some time for me to compile this, but these are suggestions, so it is up to you on whether you want to make changes. "..." represents others words that you have typed and I didn't type it for the purpose of convenience.
1. “I felt no pressure while all I can think was…” to “I felt no pressure while all I can think about was…”
2. “But while listening to the music, a part of me…”, Remove “a”
3. Replace “Enjoyment” to “Joy” (Optional)
4. “If I can really do that I might…” to “If I can do that, I might…”
5. “She’s the only relative I have…” to “She was the only relative I have…”
6. “I reached the gate of school as it…” to “I reached the school’s gate as it…”
7. “…introduced himself to us as our homeroom teacher.” to “…introduced himself to us.”
8. “As you can say, I just started working…” to “As you can see, I just started working…”
9. “Can’t help I guess, …” to “Can’t help it, I guess, …”
10. “… the guys already marked you as threat…” to “…the guys already marked you as a threat…”
11. “I took my notebook and write a copy of…” to “I took my notebook and wrote a copy of…”
12. “I stopped on writing when what he said sank on my mind.” to “I stopped writing when his words sank on my mind.”
13. “For some reasons, even if how much I can say that I don’t like having that dream for almost making me late today, a part of me was confuse on why I have that dream.” To “For some reasons, even if I don’t like having that dream for almost making me late today, part of me was confused as to why I have that dream.”
14. “I can’t forget the feeling when I played…” to “I couldn’t forget the feeling when I played…”
15. “Well, heck, this is clearly unrelated.” To “Well, heck, this was clearly unrelated.”
16. “It’s not like that dream was threat…” to “It’s not like that dream was a threat…”
17. “…I get the basics, besides I don’t really plan…” “…I get the basics, besides, I don’t really plan…”
18. “So he was Hachisaki-kun.” To “So he is Hachisaki-kun.”
19. “…not the type to stand out but since he was my seatmate, we will…” to “…not the type to stand out but, since he was my seatmate, we will…”
20. “Middle C is a very important thing in playing the piano.” to “Middle C is a very important key in playing the piano.”
21. “He looks at his records and look for some names.” To “He looked at his records for some names.”
22. “…, it feels like the heaven…” to “…, it felt like the heaven…”
23. “He said as he put the music sheet in front…” to “He said as he placed the music sheet in front…”
24. “It was like, I unconsciously played the piece.” To “It was like, I subconsciously played the piece.”
25. “I got back in my senses…” to “I got back to my senses…”
26. “Hachisaki-kun took his leave while banging the door close…” to “Hachisaki-kun took his leave and closed the door behind him with a bang…”
27. “Ahehehe, sorry.” To “Ehehehe, sorry.”
28. “…thought that you’re a pro pianist.” To “… thought that you’re a professional pianist.”
29. “I’m just going to say sorry to Hachisaki-kun…” to “I’m just going to apologize to Hachisaki-kun…”
30. “I took a sigh and changed my shoes.” To “I sighed and changed my shoes.”
31. “She’s running towards my direction.” To “She was running towards my direction.”
