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For the curious reader, things evolve differently on different places. You might want to look deeper on these other nests:

https://archiveofourown.org/series/3477619
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Jan 05, 2025

Gomi has no intention of reverse smoothie her friend's brain anymore now does she?

I Swapped Bodies with My School’s Cleaning Robot, Who Somehow Has More Rizz Than Me?!

Chapter:15

Jan 05, 2025

You're writing good comedy!

I Swapped Bodies with My School’s Cleaning Robot, Who Somehow Has More Rizz Than Me?!

Chapter:9

Jan 05, 2025

Wondering how far and long will the cheerful insanity go.

I Swapped Bodies with My School’s Cleaning Robot, Who Somehow Has More Rizz Than Me?!

Chapter:7

Jan 05, 2025

Having fun!

I Swapped Bodies with My School’s Cleaning Robot, Who Somehow Has More Rizz Than Me?!

Chapter:2

Jan 04, 2025

The previous chapter wasn't much for me but this one is better. It addresses the wider implications of the technologies in a reasonable way.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:25

Jan 03, 2025

To:Slow

Fair wonder!

Blue Rose α

Chapter:4

Jan 01, 2025

Well that's a good chapter. Although now I'm more and more wary of Airi. :D
Because she's funding the development of forbidden technologies, so perhaps she does has nefarious intents in mind, and the genius and eager boy as her scapegoat. Or more optimistically, she wants to use them as the right jurisprudence to change the law for the medical better.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:23

Jan 01, 2025

To:Slow

Hey nothing to forgive. It's just my taste toward the writing elements. nioup

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:20

Jan 01, 2025

Tomomi is well written through and through. Airi I feel deserves a bit more, to explain her motivation in this situation she appeared recently in and is so willingly eager to invest a lot into.
To draw a parallel, she appears in their life a bit as if you had begun the story wit Kokoro entering Taro's room and getting the neural link. It's a tad intense and sudden for me, even if the character has good reasons and motivations behind. (unless you tell me later that Airi is Kokoro's real mother/aunt / had a similar story herself)

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:22

Jan 01, 2025

Hm... I can understand why you want this deus ex machina for what will likely happen next, but this chapter looks to me a bit clumsy compared to the previous ones. Airi being around at the right time and place, understanding everything, being in the right frame of mind and somehow using her power to help. It's a bit much and a bit fast for my taste.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:20

Jan 01, 2025

Good to see adults acting normally enough.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:19

Jan 01, 2025

She can have a "dream voice" since it's directly her fantasy yes.
I'm personally not a fan of the "instantaneous buzz and success" story elements. The progress to reach voice was good. The switch from K having a voice to national stardom is a bit swift for my taste.

Excellent chapter end!
The last paragraph detached after the reveal, I would suggest to send in the beginning of the next chapter, to keep this one ending on the high note.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:17

Jan 01, 2025

Well Kokoro is assertive. Much better to romcoms that last a hundred years without admitting anything. here we see progress and the pace is good.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:14

Jan 01, 2025

I concur with the previous comment, the flow is nice and not shallow like light novels can often be. It's good.

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:13

Jan 01, 2025

I'm a bit confused about the "reversing the parts". It's the same principle for both for an hearing aid and a megaphone. But Babble-on gets it so I think it's good. :D

Music and Metal: A silent melody

Chapter:12

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