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A random truck-kun appears bearing gifts of isekai!
What is an Achievement?
Jun 18, 2023
To:lolitroy
Yeah, it's Daichi. Stupid autocorrect. I'll go fix it now.
There will definitely be more irl scenes as the impact of those dreams start influencing his daily life, as Haru begins to realize how much fun reality actually can be.
Are they, or am I purposefully leaving a trail of crumbs for you to peck at? Would love to know your theory. 🤠
Uh oh, I did happen to grab a reference pick from a gacha game. 😆
To:minatika
Make Claire breathe flames and send the Roki chump up to Mia on horseback, puffing himself up like 'the elf he is'. 😆
I'll definitely come back to this. I was just sleepy when I got to here.
As someone else said, a little bit of narration to flesh out your characters between dialogue could really help with the story. Kenji and Izumi feel like talking bully heads, which I don't really know why the MC is friends with, for example.
I was left a little confused. The vagueness of the scene didn't lend itself to telling me much about how exactly the meeting impacted the MC. We get a meeting in the rain, but how was it 'special'?
To:Harmonica Writes
Thanks Harmi, glad you liked my weeb-fueled boogieness. 🤠
Jun 17, 2023
You're the saddest case I ever met~~ But you can bet before we're through~~ Mister, I'll make an elf out of you~~
Enjoying the story so far. Though I thought he'd have botched this one so bad that he'd have no choice but try another world for love.
Hey, at least the witch is tech savvy along with the magic. Gotta roll with the modern times. 😅
Oh snap, multiverse shenanigans.
Also, when the witch said, "You're in my world now," my mind totally went:
"Not your world. And I've got friends on the other side!~~~" ~~[Princess and the Frog]
"Dreams end eventually."
But how you choose to let it end determines the type of story is told.
Haru is young. He stronk against diabetes.
He also has no choice but to play along to the hottie that is Koichi. 😘
Just Grace, Just Grace... Ju-st... Gra--ce~~~~~
I think you'll be right on some of those points. As to which ones, I'll leave you guessing. 😉
My head be spinning as you build up the relationship points of each option of a dating sim.