Sep 03, 2021
I really like what you do with the rhythm and action of the scenes. Taking each scene on its own, the pace and style really hits. And there's plenty to really draw the reader in and get the blood pumping. I particular like the snappy dialogue that gives a lot of characterization to the cast itself, without needed to explain much else.
After getting through a couple of chapters though, I did start getting a strange vibe. The weaving of one scene to the next had a slight disconnect at times, like you were trying to go from one highlight to the next. It felt like I had little room to breathe, with the tension remaining constantly high. Some people may like it like that, but I found it a little exhausting. Therefore, you may get a different reaction for those that read each chapter one at a time as they release vs. someone binging through.
Still, it's a very good read so far. I find it interesting even though it's not my cup of tea.