Sep 12, 2023
To:Naru_Sheny
A bit, tbh. There are many ways to pull off the isolation/bullying vibe. It feels like you took a bunch of the harsher/ruder examples to make a point, which lined up in a row starts feeling a bit forced. In contrast, you can get a similar feel with people simply avoiding them or saying things barely within earshot, without having to directly impose. Subtle gestures can go a long way, like Ravel seeing people's faces shifting to disgust without a single word exchanged. If you do check out Kimi ni Todoke, there's a lot of examples on how people react to the MC (who looks like Sadako from the Ring) in a spectrum of different ways.