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A owl who set out to explore its own forest.

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Dec 23, 2024

To:Cream Cookie

I think the concept of utopia can be different for everyone. In fact, many novels that are considered dystopias in literature were actually written as utopias. I don’t believe perfection is possible, neither for a person nor for a nation. That’s why, to me, what’s perfect is something that’s constantly evolving. This is the perspective I wrote from.

I'm so glad you liked the chapter.😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:7

Dec 23, 2024

To:Cream Cookie

I'm so glad you liked it. Yes, Kaede is a dependent lover, as you’ve noticed, which is why she reacts and does things far more extreme than an average partner would. I’m happy that came across. 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:6

Dec 23, 2024

To:Sammi9519

The timing is a bit off, but I think it’s going to be interesting.

It makes me so happy that my very first reader from the beginning of the book still supports my work. Thank you so much. I'm so glad you’re here. 😊💗

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:16

Dec 23, 2024

To:Minny

I definitely wouldn’t want that kind of chance either. Poor Kaede. 💔

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:16

Dec 23, 2024

To:Sammi9519

I agree. Even though she’s not very in touch with emotions, I think she’s quite rational.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:14

Dec 22, 2024

It was such a sudden and fast-paced start. Since I didn’t know what the characters looked like, I had a hard time visualizing them. But I loved the dialogue and your narration. The atmosphere was so intense that I felt my breathing quicken as I read. Later, I thought I might not have fully understood it, so I asked ChatGPT to translate it into my native language and read it again. It's a very impressive beginning. I don’t expect an entire novel to continue like this, but I’d feel bad if I didn’t read a book that reflects the atmosphere this well.

BlackBrain

Chapter:1

Dec 22, 2024

To:Viktor

Thank you for your critique and comments. I wrote this chapter because it will be difficult to address the characters' everyday lives and relationships in the events to come. I believe you will better understand my intention as you read the upcoming chapters.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:3

Dec 21, 2024

To:Minny

I enjoy writing intense scenes. Yes, there’s a lot of new information about Ren in this chapter. Thank you for reading! 👍

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:7

Dec 21, 2024

To:Frieren

Actually, I originally wrote this chapter as two separate chapters, but I shortened it considerably to avoid boring the reader. Your comment shows that the chapter achieved its purpose, and that makes me very happy. Thank you!

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:3

Dec 21, 2024

To:Otaku

I'm so glad you liked it. Thank you for reading! 👍

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:13

Dec 21, 2024

To:lolitroy

Yes, I know. That's why, while there are no such issues in normal weather, problems like this can occur in rainy weather when body temperature drops and the electromagnetic signals from the body become harder to detect due to environmental factors.

Thank you for reading. 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:1

Dec 19, 2024

To:BHoney

I don’t think it’s scary, but I’m glad you find it more interesting.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:0

Dec 19, 2024

To:Minny

I’m writing as fast as I can. How wonderful it is if I managed to impress you! ✍️

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:13

Dec 19, 2024

To:Otaku

Depressing writing is my style. This is probably the softest novel I've written. I hope this change excites you rather than disturbs you.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:13

Dec 15, 2024

To:Minny

Yes, I think writing is a very demanding and meticulous job. Still, I'm quite happy with my situation. I'm so glad you liked it too.

A Fly in the Hive

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