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A owl who set out to explore its own forest.

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Jan 02, 2025

I think this chapter is pure chaos, fun, and a story of brotherhood! Randy's obsession with 'mojo' is so ridiculous but so entertaining that you can’t look away. I mean, imagine drinking a glowing green beverage, and your stomach starts glowing! You can totally feel Ralphy’s vibe of 'Am I taking this seriously or losing my mind?' And picking that old-school slot machine... I think it’s a total gut-instinct win. But Randy’s endless appetite for gambling?! Definitely, every family has someone like that. 😄

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:3

Jan 02, 2025

I think Arwain’s resilience and Dingleberry’s clumsy heroics are both endearing and inspiring

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:5

Jan 02, 2025

Iori’s mischievous antics and Mei’s unwavering discipline make for such a fun dynamic

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:7

Jan 02, 2025

Stella's observations of simple things enrich the everyday details of this utopia. Itfeel like this utopia isn't a sterile world but still holds a sweet chaos that's deeply human (and robotic)

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:4

Jan 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I condensed the festival from three chapters into just one, and I’ve removed the romance from the book entirely. I think that’s the biggest change.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:5

Jan 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

The tone continues to shift as the story progresses. I hope you enjoy reading it.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:3

Jan 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Honestly, writing without limiting myself to the concept of "utopia" felt much more comfortable. I also think it fits better. No matter how hard I tried, it never really turned out to be very utopian anyway.
I hope I can create a better novel than the one I wrote before.😅

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:2

Jan 01, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thank you so much for your support. Most of the chapters will actually remain the same, but since I need to delete and rewrite certain parts or certain chapters, I'm not publishing the chapters without editing them first. Every day, I read, edit, and publish a few chapters. It's been a bit of a hectic process, so I haven't had much time to read books lately, but I’ll continue with En Passant Grandmaster and Limitless Vlogging as well. Best of luck to both of us in the contest! 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:0

Jan 01, 2025

Stella's view of the world is deep and philosophical. The journey in this little rocket is not only physical, but also emotional.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:3

Jan 01, 2025

President Micki's calm and sympathetic demeanor doesn't really seem to scare anyone at first, but you can still feel the power in it.

The World Doesn't Change So Easily

Chapter:4

Jan 01, 2025

Opening a food truck in space is a funny idea! It seems that every moment will be an adventure full of surprises.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:1

Jan 01, 2025

The chapter’s ending takes a sharp, unexpected turn, shifting from lighthearted fun to intense suspense. It’s a cliffhanger that leaves you desperate to know how the team will face this looming threat!

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:4

Dec 29, 2024

**Important Update:**
The final two chapters of *A Fly in the Hive* were almost complete, but I have decided to rewrite the book from the beginning and shift it from the Harmonic Future category to Alternative History. Romance will remain only as a supporting element to psychology, and the war sections will be expanded.

Making such a major change just two weeks before the deadline and with only two chapters left is definitely challenging, but I believe the result will be a work worthy of the effort I’ve put into it.

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:0

Dec 29, 2024

To:Mario Nakano 64

I don't want to give away any spoilers, but these thoughts seem pretty clever and prescient. Thank you for reading 😊

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:5

Dec 29, 2024

To:_Caity_

Thank you so much, you're absolutely right. I'll try to resolve the genre issue before the contest deadline. Honestly, I think the rules are very strict and stifle creativity, but we didn’t set the rules, after all. I guess I didn’t read the guidelines carefully enough. Thanks a lot for pointing it out!

A Fly in the Hive

Chapter:0

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