Dec 22, 2024
It was such a sudden and fast-paced start. Since I didn’t know what the characters looked like, I had a hard time visualizing them. But I loved the dialogue and your narration. The atmosphere was so intense that I felt my breathing quicken as I read. Later, I thought I might not have fully understood it, so I asked ChatGPT to translate it into my native language and read it again. It's a very impressive beginning. I don’t expect an entire novel to continue like this, but I’d feel bad if I didn’t read a book that reflects the atmosphere this well.
