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Rowan.Burns

A owl who set out to explore its own forest.

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Jan 11, 2025

Stella's "peach pie for breakfast" adventure has a delightfully quirky charm, with moments of both awkwardness and whimsy. It's like watching someone trying to fit in when they're clearly from another world, but in the end, it feels like a small, sweet attempt at connection.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:12

Jan 11, 2025

It's interesting how the characters keep trying to navigate a world that doesn’t make sense to them

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:11

Jan 11, 2025

Fuyukawashigurebob is one of the best names I’ve ever seen, but I personally prefer something more like 'Jugemu Jugemu Unko Nageki Ototoi no Shin-chan no Pantsu Shinpachi no Jinsei Barumunku Fezarion Aizakku Shunaidaa Sanbun no Ichi no Junjou na Kanjou no Nokotta Sanbun no Ni wa Sakamuke ga Kininaru Kanjou Uragiri wa Boku no Namae wo Shitteiru you de Shiranai no wo Boku wa Shitteiru Rusu Surume Medaka Kazunoko Koedame Medaka... Kono Medaka wa Sakki to Chigau Yatsu Dakara Ikeno Medaka no Hou Dakara Raayu Yuuteimiyaoukimukou Pepepepepepepepepepepepe Bichiguso Maru (lol)

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:10

Jan 11, 2025

This chapter made me think about loneliness, it captures the weight of waiting and feeling out of place beautifully.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:9

Jan 11, 2025

This reminded me of quirky sci-fi stories like The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy, where the absurdity of life is woven into unexpectedly philosophical moments.

Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!

Chapter:8

Jan 07, 2025

To:Sammi9519

I hope so. keep going! ✍️ good luck 😊

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:15

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter feels a bit too long.
I didn't pay attention to the previous ones, but the competition rules recommend that chapters be between 1,000 and 1,500 words. This chapter seems to contain the length of two chapters. I'm not a judge, of course, but I just wanted to give you a heads-up in case you weren't aware.
Good luck! 😊

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:17

Jan 07, 2025

This chapter was so heartwarming and full of little moments that really made me smile! 😊 The group dynamics are always fun, but there's also this underlying tension that keeps things interesting.

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:16

Jan 07, 2025

The scene by the oak tree was so poignant, and Alex’s quiet support added a nice layer to their dynamic. I'm curious to see how things will evolve with Stacy and Lizzy, and the tension between the characters is building nicely

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:15

Jan 07, 2025

I enjoyed the way the interactions built up tension, especially with Lizzy’s unexpected moment at the lake 😄

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:14

Jan 07, 2025

To:Sammi9519

Thank you. It was a very logical decision.
I wasn't able to read other books much while writing my own. That's why I can now read freely after finishing my book. The character dynamics in Thorns in Paradise seem interesting. I will definitely continue. 😊

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:10

Jan 07, 2025

I liked how you revealed more about Alex’s past and how it connects to his reactions.

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:11

Jan 07, 2025

Nice chapter! Lizzy's confidence and Alex's concern for her create a great dynamic. The mix of humor and tension keeps things interesting. Looking forward to more!

Stacy's failed ambush

Thorns in Paradise

Chapter:10

Jan 02, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Her scenes are both hilarious and unforgettable. Her clashes with Mei add such a great dynamic to the series. It's amazing to see such a lovable character, and I can't wait to see more moments featuring her in the future!

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En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:7

Jan 02, 2025

Arwain’s journey from eager dreamer to an active flyer is so vividly described, I almost felt the wind rushing past myself. His determination and excitement are so contagious! And Arwain and Jolly’s friendship is the kind that truly warms your heart ✨

Hi Flyers!

Chapter:7