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- Marshall Eastman

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Aug 14, 2026

To:Literate_Manul

Yeah, I leaned hard into the dragonfly/damselfly aspect. Certainly not compliant with the fluffy-ears-fluffy-tail waifu meta. Glad you like it.

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:12

Aug 14, 2026

Ah, so that's Raiga's history. He made the right choice, though it cost him dearly. (Wonder if that kid he saved will make an appearance at some point)

THE HERETIC

Chapter:5

Aug 14, 2026

Ah, okay. Think I get it now. The first chapter made me think Fiona would be the antagonist, but I see that wasn't the plan. Think I'll keep going and see where this goes

The SSR Wizard's Guide to not Wasting Mana

Chapter:3

Aug 13, 2026

The protagonist seems very aware that he's boxed in: middle child of the family, unable to object or even get food himself. Interesting starting condition for a tragedy, curious to see what direction it goes.

Also: cool fish.

Amaranthine: Dragon's Haven

Chapter:1

Aug 13, 2026

when that pair suggested Sera join them just because she was cute... people trying to pick someone up at the adventurer's guild is the fantasy equivalent of people who try to pick people up at the gym.

The Banished Lancer's New Party

Chapter:9

Aug 13, 2026

Even in a fantasy world, cream puffs are cheaper than therapy.

Hakucho no Kensei: The Swan Sword Saint Deserves a Happy Ending!

Chapter:7

Aug 13, 2026

To:Literate_Manul

Glad you liked it! I've got plans for that mask and its problems.

You'll get a detailed look at the odonaran next chapter (this will be a recurring character).

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:11

Aug 13, 2026

To:rhedak

Thank you. I wanted this chapter to slalom from serious to banter and back to serious, and chose the tarp/tent talk for that first transition.

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:11

Aug 12, 2026

The hypertext-nature of the grimoire is neat, the annotations hinting at the previous owners' lives. Cool stuff.

That Witch Concerns Her

Chapter:6

Aug 12, 2026

To:rhedak

I have a fever, and the only prescription is inventing a new magic system every fantasy story I write.

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:10

Aug 12, 2026

To:rhedak

thanks, I hoped these two would go well together

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:9

Aug 12, 2026

To:rhedak

That was the plan from the start: Brocwhel misses his chances to save his friend and the order, then has to go through some twists and turns to learn the necessary lessons to not repeat his (and the order's) mistakes.

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:8

Aug 11, 2026

the protagonist is very good at reading people while those other peoples' attention slides off him. I always find that trait cool in characters when it's portrayed well (as it is here)

The Hero of the Mist Tragedy

Chapter:3

Aug 11, 2026

Pan has unlocked dodge-tanking. But which martial art will she end up doing, I wonder? Even if it's not a direct parallel to a real one, there's a good bit of variety to draw inspiration from under that wide category.

Hakucho no Kensei: The Swan Sword Saint Deserves a Happy Ending!

Chapter:6

Aug 11, 2026

To:rhedak

I committed myself to writing a sad moment the heartbeat I decided to start a bit before the tragedy and then show it playing out. Glad to know it's working as intended (I used to only be able to write comedy, so this is an extension of my range).

Brochwel the Usurper

Chapter:6

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