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Don’t ruffle my feathers with bad prose.
Current reading list (not in order): Hotwired! Air Born BlackBrain The World Doesn't Change So Easily Red Line Finding Ezri Eclipse Guardians Seike so much to read @_@
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Dec 17, 2024
This chapter was intense! I feel for Ana. I'm all here for the war machine tho. Will keep tabs on your work :)
Very promising chapter. I like the android so far. Also, that last part about needing help with writing is hitting way too close to home 🙃
Awesome work. Very nice job capturing the intensity and emotion of the situation. And hey, I’m on a one-month deadline too, so solidarity ig lol. Just take it bit by bit- one idea, one scene, one day at a time. GL!
Reading this gives me major 'The Last of Us' vibes, but with a mother-daughter focus. As others have mentioned, the grammar could use some improvement, but otherwise I see this as a great story in the making! Will be reading more chapters soon.
Dec 16, 2024
Nice prologue. Really sets up the stage for an intense story. Also interested who Hiroshi is. His name popped up at the end, and I'm curious about his role in all of this.
Late to the train, but this chapter was amazing! You really brought the Arena to life with vivid imagery. I felt like I was right there in the audience, watching Raine and Astra perform! Looking forward to reading more 😊
