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Don’t ruffle my feathers with bad prose.
Current reading list (not in order): Hotwired! Air Born BlackBrain The World Doesn't Change So Easily Red Line Finding Ezri Eclipse Guardians Seike so much to read @_@
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Dec 18, 2024
Love the SoL shenanigans between Pierrot and Dango at the beginning, especially the way he struggles with simple tasks like cooking and cleaning. Also, what a way to introduce Vincent! Poor Pierrot taking the brunt of that chair toss tho
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Glad you think so! I had a lot of fun exploring the idea. Hope you stick around to see how the story unfolds 😁
Wow, this chapter really got me thinking. Raine's flawless performance feels like a deeper take on how obsessed society is with perfection. Kinda gave me Black Swan vibes- like that whole intense dive into perfectionism. Fingers crossed Lena doesn’t go down the same dark path as the MC in that movie (if you know you know). Also, nothing like a good cup of coffee to bring you back to reality lol
Dec 17, 2024
My boy LeBlanche casually disrespecting tea at the beginning lmao. Also, loving RAM-71's eagerness to help out Hana- can't wait to see more of it in future chapters! Got my cozy vibes for the day 😊
As someone who loves (or possibly addicted to) tea, this story feels like it was made for me- Hana’s excitement perfectly mirrors how I feel about my favorite brews. Can't wait to read more!
This chapter was intense! I feel for Ana. I'm all here for the war machine tho. Will keep tabs on your work :)
Very promising chapter. I like the android so far. Also, that last part about needing help with writing is hitting way too close to home 🙃
Awesome work. Very nice job capturing the intensity and emotion of the situation. And hey, I’m on a one-month deadline too, so solidarity ig lol. Just take it bit by bit- one idea, one scene, one day at a time. GL!
Reading this gives me major 'The Last of Us' vibes, but with a mother-daughter focus. As others have mentioned, the grammar could use some improvement, but otherwise I see this as a great story in the making! Will be reading more chapters soon.
Dec 16, 2024
Late to the train, but this chapter was amazing! You really brought the Arena to life with vivid imagery. I felt like I was right there in the audience, watching Raine and Astra perform! Looking forward to reading more 😊
