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ART by the AMAZING furies. Please check out Reverse of the Rain. carthonladler74
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Feb 12, 2025
Good start, love your prose. Love me some sheltered girl stories. I'd suggest separating the paragraphs a little so that it makes it a little easier to read for the reader.
To:Ashley
I believe and I see the vision
STICK TO YOUR GUNS, YOU WOULDNT
One of my mates only got his Permit when he was 24, so I believe him
I LOVE ROBOT POV STORIES AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Our protag has a VERY deep vocabulary hahahahaha good chap and looking forward to more
WHAT THE FUCK 🤧😭
To:Moon
He really is
Hes a hopeless romantic. Imagine what a scenario like this would do a real human bean....
I LOVE THIS. Not the slavery
Decent start!! If I may, I'd suggest you separate paragraphs a little so that it is easier for the reader to comprehend
Feb 11, 2025
Big fan so far, but the formatting could be fixed up a little. Otherwise, good luck and happy writing
Godsend. Shouldnt be doing those, but luckily its so early into the comp... these types of errors should be few and far between going forward
Think I love you
Oh I saw the error good catch. Edited
