Mar 16, 2025
Similarly to what I said about the last chapter, I love how the narration is completely contrasting as a result of characterization. It can be hard to create noticeable variations while doing multiple POVs, so bravo for that.
But as much as I'm enjoying your writing, I do have to wonder where the cultural differences come into play? So far, the characters are unique, but not *culturally* unique. Unless these aspects simply haven't been introduced yet, I am a bit concerned at how this will follow the prompt.
Aside from that, I think this is a very well-written story so far. 
