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registered at: Nov 24, 2024

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Feb 13, 2025

"I hadn't seen that gesture since I murdered his family."

That was so unexpected and I feel bad for laughing LOL

End of Service was Announced, So I'm Retiring as the Last Boss to Become a Bard!

Chapter:0

Feb 13, 2025

Not me forgetting this is a romance and being like "No Elisa, don't fall for it! You're supposed to be hard to get!" 🤣 Another fun chapter, I'm enjoying this

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:3

Feb 12, 2025

To:Noa Mora

Yay! Appreciated, thanks!

Stories across the Five Tribes

Chapter:0

Feb 12, 2025

NOT THE DUOLINGO OWL 🤣

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Chapter:0

Feb 11, 2025

Oh my gosh, I feel so bad for this poor girl! Yet I'm also hooked to see how her story unfolds.

Girl and the Rift

Chapter:0

Feb 11, 2025

This seems like it'll be a very interesting read so far, keep up the good work. I'm a bit confused by one section though, why does Elisa ask Cynthia for her name twice?

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:2

Feb 11, 2025

Wow, I wasn't expecting that twist at all, but I loved it! It tied together the confusions of the chapter very well, and left it off with a solid cliffhanger. You also have a talent at writing engaging dialogue. Great job

Tinker, Tailor, Tyrant, Traitor, Husband… Mine?!

Chapter:1

Feb 10, 2025

To:Shulox

Thank you! 😊 Hope you stick around!

Stories across the Five Tribes

Chapter:0

Jan 13, 2025

Your method of worldbuilding is great, and your writing style flows very smoothly. I have a feeling something is going to happen to poor Lucy. Going to keep reading!

The Drift of Time

Chapter:1

Dec 23, 2024

Ahh, a Neverland-inspired story I'm guessing so far? Love the concept and the characters seem interesting. Poor Russell though!

War in Nevertown

Chapter:1

Dec 21, 2024

Loved the dialogue between Archie and Jiro. The reveal that Jiro is "dead" to the reader was also a very well-appreciated twist. The world of the Digiscape is an intriguing concept that makes you want to learn more. I'd definitely like to read more of this 👍

Memoria

Chapter:2

Dec 17, 2024

Wow, this chapter took me by surprise. I wasn't expecting the ending, and it makes me curious to read more. You also did a good job describing the world from her view, a "city above a city" sounds so cool. Looks like an intriguing story so far! 😊

Experience II

Chapter:1

Dec 15, 2024

Zipper seems like a fun character, I hope she realizes being 24 isn't the end of the world 🤣This looks like it'd be an interesting story so far, good work

And I Feel Fine

Chapter:1

Dec 14, 2024

I really like the way you describe the atmosphere, I could picture everything in my head. Your writing style is nice, and so far I'm intrigued to see where this goes!

When Clouds Have Cried

Chapter:1

Dec 09, 2024

Interesting start! I'm curious to see the purpose of Shion's mission and how the Upper society is like. Very good concept so far!

The Nietzsche Protocol (TNP): The Cult

Chapter:1

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