Jun 26, 2025
To:Mario Nakano 64
So the original was just the first five chapters, but I wanted to make it way bigger, so I did try to go a certain direction, but, in my opinion, it wouldn't been good. So I did some rewrites and now the whole thing is down. I would say the only real change you missed is that they used a gadget called "FOCUS" which is an AI implant as spies. It allows them to have certain skills and talents. I felt like there was a larger world to make and I still wanted to do Mango's character justice. I wouldn't say that it's super different though, just expanded
