Feb 21, 2025
To:Mario Nakano 64
Thank you for the wonderful comments and the review, no need to apologize i genuinely grinned when i saw all of the notifications and i was real happy reading all of your comments, i laughed out loud at the curro is a yandere comment😂
I would respond to the comments idividually but it would be a bit reduntant so i will just respond here, but i do appreciate that you left one on every chapter, it was cool to see your thoughts in real time as you read
Also thank you for providing critiques along the way and in your review, i do agree with them. The summayness of the final chapters is certantly on point and you are not the first to point it out. Looking at it again and yeah that whole area needed more work to be totally satisfying, i was going for it to be deliberatly anti climactic post trial as the trial was supposed to be the big climax of the story, though the summaryness should have been as you said, less bloated and better executed. I was writting the whole finale very quickly to meet the deadline and i had no energy to rework it once i wrote everything, if i had more time i would have defently polished it more but i didnt have the will and it was my fault for entering the competition so late. Maybe the post trial stuff gets expanded on and reworked into something better than it was here in a possible second edition in some future😂
I am thrilled to see how quickly you binged it and hearing that you enjoyed it, it means a lot to hear and yeah hitomi is best girl! I am pretty proud of the characters and they were a ton of fun to write
Thank you so much for the read and review
(P.S.I didnt forget or drop your story! I really enjoyed it, tbh i was just not in the mood for reading at all after finishing my novel, but i want to read it to the end and you can expect to hear my full thoughts very soon
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