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May 05, 2025
To:Japanese🌹Rose
Thank you! I appreciate it! I'm glad I was able to convey those moments well 😭
Val is definitely happy about being out of that place as well lol. Too many questions are running through Cael's mind at the moment to appreciate it too much though
And hehe, no comment indeed 😂
To:Mara
Mysterious pasts are fun, lol But yep, it's my intention for this to be a bit more grounded. And thank you! The tone comparison to Gibson is super flattering 🥰
This was a fun chapter! A small part of me wished for an extra punch or two to accidentally land on the colonel though 😇
Great job, Kenji!
May 04, 2025
To:Deleted User
Thank you so much!😭
Kenji!!! Yes, go for it! Help Airi! Fall in love with her like an idiot! 😍
The moment where Kenji has more emotional maturity than his father though... I'm just glad that at least some things have been worked through 😅
You've succeeded in making the most lovable characters I want to protect (Airi and Kenji) AND the most horrible ones I want to punch.
Great job! 😅
Really hoping Kenji gets answers though
I can't disguise my loathing for these characters behind honeyed words anymore.
I really want to punch the general and that colonel in the face 😡
(Love Airi though, she's doing amazing being that light the world needs)
Where is Pepper? 🫠 I really hope the possibility is one thing over the other
On another note, it's nice to have some respite in the aftermath of everything that's happened. Father and Sthuna's mini conflict over the food made me giggle a little
Eyna is so precious. I'm glad Sthuna has her to help ground him. 😩
Quick observation though, "He whirls on her." Was that and the rest of the line meant to be in present tense?
The way you transitioned things from the inferno below, to the vast sky, and then suddenly back within Mother's embrace was absolute poetry. The struggle as she tried to fly invoked the image of Kiki from Kiki's Delivery Service when she struggled to save Tombo mid-flight
Sthuna though... 🥲
Not sure if I can add too much more than what I've already been saying, but this was beautiful as always, and the subtle world-building you're doing is great.
I probably would've done the same if I were alone lol, but Cael is doing his best to be brave!
And hehe, I'm happy you're this invested! Thank you so much for your comments, they really make my day! 🥰
Everything that's been building up, it feels good knowing that Elisabeth isn't just going to lay down and throw a pity party, but fight for what she wants, even if things are getting messy
I'm so proud of her 😭
The hallucinations and other weirdness have had me raising an eyebrow ever since they've been mentioned, especially that knight from earlier. Really wondering how it all ties in, but I'm beginning to get my suspicions.
Anyways, now that those observations are out of the way...
NOOOO!!!! You're making me sad again! Curse you and your engaging and lovely but depressing writing!! 😭
My heart 💔
Admittedly the tonal shift at the end confused me a little. A little transition or earlier hint toward it coming would've been nice to soften it a little.
The quiet moment earlier in the chapter was nice though. The DSLR camera constantly adds a groundedness to things