Sep 16, 2025
Truth be told, the beginning was kinda slow and a bit dense. But then at around chapter 9(the Royal Academy conflict) I started getting hooked and enjoyed every part of this story, from the arguments in Celta Muis to the trek on the Abyss and the final conclusion at the Monastery.
You really nailed the melancholic journey feeling in this story, and even if you say you struggled with making things come together, I think you managed to tie mostly everything in a perfect way, especially with the last few chapters.
I also respect that the final confrontation with the "villain" wasn't an actual fight but instead a calm conversation related to the themes of the story. Besides, the real climax of the story was in chapters 40-41 and oh boy were those touching.
So thank you for writing such a heartfelt story(I finally know why Bubbles calls you Peaksei) and I wish you the best in your future works, whenever they may come.