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Cashew Cocoa

Just a writer for fun. I like my characters like onions, full of layers.
You can find my Discord account on the HF server. DMs are open if you want to chat.
All feedback is welcome, I promise I won't get offended.
Sending love and peace for everyone. Free hug included, and I wish you all the best.

registered at: Mar 05, 2025

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Jan 24, 2026

At least I don't get overwhelmed by all the Yokai names since I've studied about them for my own story.
But someone should really chill out with the amount of magic items and mythical concepts.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:40

Jan 24, 2026

The chapters is cool but...
Why is Hideka even here?
Well, I guess at least I won't have more complains about her questionable role in the plot from now on.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:37

Jan 23, 2026

Not gonna lie, the Deus-ex-Poster really worried me for a moment and made me think the climax would be meh and underwhelming, and I'm so glad I was wrong. These last 2 chapters were back at the peak.
Yes, I agree stuff is unfinished and missing(curse you Lemmings), and I'm particularly sad that we won't get a dramatic payoff to the stakes that have been set. But nonetheless, I'm surprisingly fine with this being a vol1 type of ending, even if you may not have plans to continue it.
Overall, I'm satisfied, and still insist that this is a great story even if it's not your favorite child this time around(which is also thematically fitting, tbh).

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:19

Jan 23, 2026

This is unironically pretty good. Unexpected and bizarre, but not random or out of nowhere. It actually fits Riku to be the experimental weirdo that blows everyone's expectations by breaking convention and mainstream rules.

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:18

Jan 23, 2026

Okay... bit of a questionable plot device...
Lets see how things develop after this.

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:17

Jan 23, 2026

You heard her, Riku, be like a cockroach. A handsomely attractive cockroach.

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:16

Jan 23, 2026

Fun chapter.
And it added some pretty interesting details to their dynamic, particularly the "Kagayaki is everything I never was."

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:14

Jan 23, 2026

To:Gemini Daydream

I meant it more in the sense that she is Quasi-omniscient and has been doing the whole "killing for the greater good" for far far longer than ET and so she's undeniable better at it.
But sure, simping for her is also fine.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:30

Jan 23, 2026

In what context exactly did Death see Pestilence shoving the Hand of Glory's fingers into... "something"?

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:33

Jan 23, 2026

Also, yes, I have a problem with this but not with how fast Raven fell in love with E.T. because that one felt justified by the hormones of a dumb teenager.
I can get behind Raven not hating Hideka anymore as she has been getting some development, but I still feel like the justification for Hideka's side on this is weak or non-existent.
(I we ever get a proper chapter explaining Hideka's perspective, then I might take back these statements, well see. Until then, I believe my critique stands solidly.)

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:32

Jan 23, 2026

The entirety of the interactions between Raven and the Ueshima felt... weird(?)
I get that Hideka has her family issues and such, but why does she involve Raven in them? Why does she trust Raven? We've seen the two of them interact I think two times so far, and in both instances Raven/Death was lying through her teeth.
Are we ever getting some context as to why Hideka is fine with Raven having manipulated her just to get information?
Idk, to me it feels weird for them to be suddenly having a friends bonding chapter when up until now their relationship was that of gaslighter and gaslighted.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:32

Jan 23, 2026

Both are wailing in misery and regret. The difference is that, for once, Raven is more honest with herself than Death.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:31

Jan 23, 2026

You know, under different circumstances I would even agree with E.T.
But the main reason I don't this time is quite simple: Death knows how to do it better.

The Pale Horseman

Chapter:30

Jan 22, 2026

Riku fighting back to regain some agency was a solid scene for the narrative that—
OMYGOSH DID RIKU JUST CONFESS!?
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Ahem.
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Good chapter.
(Though I don't care much for the Yuuji bit at the end. I guess it's an ok attempt to set him up as a "rival/villain"?)

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:13

Jan 22, 2026

And I thought I was asocial, sticking with the same friend group for over a decade. But holy molly Riku, you really need to go out and touch some grass, and it's wild that this is coming from me.
On a more serious note, it's nice to see a hint of the positive working conditions in Sunburst(though it could've been shown a bit more and told less). It solidifies the stakes that hang over Kagayaki's actions.

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:12